Reviews for The Mother of Heirs
Guest chapter 18 . 4/13
Will you be updating?
Guest chapter 18 . 3/19
Good for you I love this story just the way it is forget what everyone else thinks someone is always going to have a problem with something
Leslie E chapter 18 . 3/7
Please continue this story. I find it very interesting!
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 18 . 3/4
I love your story so far! I'm glad to hear that Bella will be given the choice in the long run because she has some very real insecurities about being a mother and it would be cruel had she been forced into that position before she could work though them. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!
siren of titan chapter 17 . 3/1
Update?
twighlover chapter 18 . 2/25
I really like this story and to be honest I think you could change the names and a few aspects of the characters and make your own whole story. I would so buy this story if it was a book. I love the plot and the whole setting in the future aspect. You are very creative when it comes to the ideas to certain issues in modern life. Like for instance the pregnancy issues and how many accidents people tend to have these days oh my favorite part was about the tampon it made me crack up.
Nissa-Cullen chapter 17 . 2/23
I guess that's one way for Emmett to learn and still keep his virginity. There's still some thing left to be covered but they've got the man stuff. I like that Paul made sure to let Emmett know that the women should get pleasure before the man. Not a lot of men think that way. I don't mind this society so much. Number one its a story so you can't take it to seriously but also it doesn't seem like to bad of a society. They take care of their people. They try to make their lives better. It doesn't appear that they're trying to control people just make rules that will help the society at large. I like this story a lot.
Guest chapter 18 . 2/16
Absolutely LOVE your story! Really hope you get a chance to finish it soon! I can't wait to see what happens!
HipHopB2ST46 chapter 18 . 2/17
Hi! Just a loyal reader here, saying hello! I've been following this particular story for a very long time now. And I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE it. Forget the haters! (Hate us, cause they anus- I mean ain't us) I for one, love everything about this story; especially your story concept (mother of heirs, comission, etc) and the kind of world you have created. I really don't see how people are getting confused or offended by your story. Maybe it's just me and how I comprehend details as I read. But anyways (I apologize for rambling) the whole point to my review is to tell you: that your story is loved and you are doing a fuck - awesome job! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I will be anxiously waiting for more chapter updates 3
Kaorilamb chapter 18 . 2/17
When eventually will bellward meet? I'm reading plots angles but no conclusions, semi or fully
ilvjameslafferty chapter 18 . 2/9
Please update soon!
sparkling-stilettos chapter 18 . 2/6
I have to say I am throughly enjoying this story! Every aspect has kept me intrigued and wanting more! I am like a fat kid with cake I can't stay away lol... Love it! Keep up the great work! Thank you!
GAjujubee chapter 18 . 2/3
Update soon, please.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/28
Cant wait till Edward and Bella finally meet!
tillynat chapter 18 . 1/30
As a follower and regular reader I just wanted to say that your story is wonderful and angry reviewers who seem to have missed the point are far too closed minded and simply shouldn't read. I truly love this story and it somewhat reminds me of Margaret Atwood's Handsmaid's tale though I find myself more quickly engaged with your story. I love your conceptualisation of a more positive society. You should truly be proud of what you've created. Please continue to write with abandon and I look fotherd to your updates xx
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