Reviews for Between the dark and dark
Guest chapter 3 . 5/24/2014
update please...finished this story please...don't abandon it...
Little red chapter 3 . 4/28/2014
I hope u add the final part soon I really wanna see what happens next :) this story is really really good!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
update please...
Guest chapter 3 . 4/6/2014
Love this!
jennifer.berube.520 chapter 3 . 4/6/2014
please update. please im begging please please please update
AnabellaGC chapter 3 . 3/22/2014
ohh i want to know how this will continue!
Jade Starlight chapter 3 . 3/18/2014
Awww poor Mai! But what do you expect from a jerk like him lol! Oh well, I'm willing to bet that this isn't over ;). And that it will all be ok. This is really good for jumping into the middle of a case though. I really love the detail, and you definitely have the characters down pat. It's nice to read from Naru's point of view and feel like he's still Naru. Please update soon! I'm dying to know how this ends up! And I sincerely hope Mai sticks up for herself and doesn't let his actions at the end here slide!
Lovenarumai chapter 3 . 3/10/2014
Oh my gosh! this was awesome, I loved it *O*
This story is getting so hot
Mai is now naru' addiction, I'm sure of it . He knows she loves him. \o/
What will happen now? I can't wait to read more.
UPDATE SOON PLEASE !
Naruisawesome chapter 3 . 3/8/2014
I...I'm not exactly sure how to put this into words except that it's FREAKING AMAZINGLY AWESOME! I mean seriously!

Please update soon! :D
Nyry Queen of the Dragons chapter 3 . 3/7/2014
I so want more. Please.

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Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2014
Yes, please write a final part it seems unfinished as is, it is really good please dont stop.
AmericanFairy chapter 3 . 3/4/2014
Holy... That so hot! I love how you managed to keep them in character and delve into their individual thoughts. Can't wait for the next part!
aphr0dite09 chapter 3 . 3/4/2014
Poor Mai...it's like naru suggest a friends with benefits and she agreed to it and now she is sad...
Tsuyoku chapter 3 . 3/4/2014
You are evil for interrupting them! You are evil for ending it so abruptly! I look forward to your next installment, and I hope they get the happy ending they deserve. Good work.
Not Important chapter 3 . 3/4/2014
This is a good story, do you really feel like you can wrap it up in just one more chapter? While I agree that it shouldn't be dragged out, don't rush it either. Keep up the good work!
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