oh my gosh PLEASE update! i pray for you to, this fic is unbelievably raw and just plain fantastic! please!

Keep writing your too good at it I want to know such a good twist! keep writing please!

Oh my God! This story is so beautiful! THe best I have ever read! It's quite a shame you abandoned it... So, please Update!

hey whoa this is so... i dont know its too amazing to describe whoa the end rele got to me i cried oh im not sure if you like this type of music but i had it on while i was reading this and when all the shit started happening to tifa and yuffie like near chap 8 or 7 the song im a fake by da used was playing so i started cryin! god you are one talented writer you HAVE TO UPDATE!por tifa and i like how she hides it from everyone i mean cloud dosent even know yet they all they shes a slut and that shes a badassed girl but not on the inside thats wot makes your writing soom gd the plot lines are mind blowing!

ok, strange beginning...but otherwise, i like it!

~kk

good story! i really hope you continue updating...and...don't do drugs...it wouln't help...it'll just make it worse! -just a reminder-

This is the most captivating story I've read on this site by far. I posted a more in depth review for it on your latest story in case you don't read this.

Please update this. I have never seen such a good storyline in a cloti fic and you just cant let this fic rot.

i know that you haven't been updating since 2 years ago, but you must update this please. you completed The Line Between and that went brilliantly. i know that this one can do just as good.

so please update.

spikestrife _

p.s. CloTi forever!

Well, i know its a long shot, considering you havent updated in two years... but i'll still give it a shot.

The storys amazing. i love the way youve characterized everyone.. It really gets me into the characters head, whether its Tifa's cunningness and unimaginable wit, and i definatly feel the pain she does reading this, or Renos sick twisted mind, Aeris's confusion, and Clouds eagerness to get out... And the plot is mind-boggling. Its the kinda drama that inspires me..

Well, i'm hoping you'll update soon, but as this story has so very well pointed out, Things dont always turn out that way. Still... I'll definately be checking back every once in a while (No shit! Like i wouldnt check back to see if THIS fic is updated...)

I really like the topic of this story. You have a very unique way of getting across that drugs are not something to get into. Hopefully, people that read this story will figure that out if they do do drugs and don't know the consequences of it. Very well written. I liked it a lot. )

ei, nice work..just waiting for the update..so far so good..um, if possible, no one will die anymore..but hey,it's good anyway..just update soon..please..hope to read more stories of yours..continue the already good job..heheh..

please upload this story, i think the plot and language is so good.

My GOD. That is all I can say.

I tell you now that I do NOT review. This is actually the first fan fic that i have read that have had the urge to review.

Also, YOUR A BUM! You NEED to update. That story is the best EVER!

Hmm, i would think of more compliments to give to your stunning story and more insuLts to say to you for not updating. But i guess you just got lucky today.

One last thing...UPDATE, YOU BUM!

Oh god.

This is really good, and I have no idea why would havent updated for more than two months or so. You fugly monkey! How could! This is like one the greatest stories I ever read, I'm putting it in my favorite's list, on my s/n. This is so fucking food. Girl (or guy) you've got style and I praise you for that.

I read your first story, and it is interesting, but I say that this tops it... by a lot. Really, a lot. I love this, a classic epic ... punk guy and good girl only the other way around. I give you ten thousand points for that! Theres absolutely no spelling mistakes, grammer errors or anything (not that I've really checked). You can write, and please if you ever publish something email me (). You can not put this story on hold damnit!

I love the plot. Seriously, it has major twist and turns but, still goes along smoothly. You are talanted! SO DAMNIT UPDATE NOW! Please!

ahhhh! i've been waiting so long for the next chap... i jus had to read the fic again... its so good, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!