|Reviews for His Siren|
| Kadouzeki chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
LOL WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK
| tencentbastard chapter 4 . 4/18/2014
I'm quite intrigued, and eager to see where this story is going :)
| transcendantviewer chapter 4 . 4/16/2014
I love that you painted the enemies in such a good light. It shows that even bad people can have something good inside them. Thanks for that and keep up the great writing.
| RWBY Order chapter 4 . 3/25/2014
Almost makes me feel bad, killing badmaw the way I did. I cheated and lured him to the gate, then shot him with the catapult on my tecnical. You know you did a good job portraing emotions when you make a gamer feel bad about killing a miniboss. Also, grace got mad when badmaw shoved a rat, but didn't care that he strapping people to his sheld?
| mhzhm chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
I liked this chapter, especially how you showed that bandits even have lives.
| RWBY Order chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
| mhzhm chapter 2 . 2/28/2014
I'm liking this.
| RWBY Order chapter 2 . 2/24/2014
| Edhla chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
This is really compelling writing, and I'm canon blind. Admittedly gory, but that was no doubt the point, and it kept my attention throughout.
Just a couple of really minor quibbles - this sentence switched tenses:
"But, he can't always have his sweets"
No need for the comma, either :-) Later, you have "phased" instead of "fazed."
Enjoyed this, though... Thank you for writing xx