Reviews for Scrapyard: Naruto
Guest chapter 3 . 5/13/2015
Incredibly lame. You do the typical fanon abuse of Naruto which is fine if you then have a realistic reaction to it. You don't and that's where it becomes lame. The fic starts where Naruto does stand up to it. He swears to never fight for Konoha and to leave first chance he gets. Then Naruto whose nindo is to supposedly never go back on his word gets put in ANBU with no objection on his part and becomes a good little soldier for the village. What makes this so incredibly lame is there was no point to doing the overly abused Naruto. You could have stayed with canon treatment and had him join ANBU for less overly dramatic reasons. There was no need for such a crude emotional appeal when you didn't follow through on it.
xelsan chapter 4 . 9/14/2014
Out of all your scraps this one is by far the best and the most intriguing. I sincerely hope that you choose to actually make this scrap into a full tilt story in the future. This is one of the best story ideas I've ever read for any story and it's only in your scrap files.
Chief Minion chapter 6 . 8/22/2014
I hope you do a second part to this story. I like Yukari-Naru.
Chief Minion chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
fellow chapter 6 . 6/2/2014
Beyogi chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Hm... it would be a better starting point if you combined it with the forest scene somehow. Naruto here is an OC. All character development is off-screen.
This way it's just another awesome!Naruto fic where it could have been a very interesting gender bender character growth kind of thing.

Anyway, thank you for writing,
Wiccachic2000 chapter 6 . 4/27/2014
I have enjoyed all of your scrapyard musings (for Naruto) I have hopes that one day you will choose to pick up the pieces of all these works again (or at least some of them) but I understand that inspiration leads where it wills.
Chi Vayne chapter 5 . 4/20/2014
I would have liked to see this continued if only to see what that rationale the Hokage had for forcing that particular team. Seems to me much more madness than method. If the Hokage was trying to get Naruto to bond with a team and therefore Konoha, why put him with two who are already hostile to Naruto? Why not put him on a team with at least teammates that are at least neutral towards him?
LordsFire chapter 5 . 3/19/2014
Yet another 'better than canon in every way, shape, and form' story here. Such a pity.
LordsFire chapter 3 . 3/18/2014
Mmm. You do Naruto so much better than Kishimoto did. Again, a shame that the fandom is dying the way it is, it could have been something much better than it is.
LordsFire chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Cliche, done before, done to death, but not done *well* to death.

And this was fairly well done.

I have to agree though, I've mostly withdrawn from Naruto material as well. The series has just disintegrated, and that's had effects on the fandom.
kojiro kakita chapter 6 . 3/16/2014
It's trying to figure out which one though since tohonifun doesn't seem to have a cannon universe.

But I presume it was yukari vs ran?
The DCG chapter 6 . 2/18/2014
This plot sounds all kinds of awesome.. would be nice to see more.
The DCG chapter 4 . 2/18/2014
Damn this is an awesome start.
The DCG chapter 3 . 2/18/2014
I havnt seen any lone wolf naruto's done this well before. This was awesome.
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