Reviews for Fixing Past Mistakes |
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![]() ![]() Well you are off to a cracking start. Better than all the fictions here resorting to weird pairing and useless bashing. All i hope is that this story is completed. Otherwise it will be a waste of time |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I was bawling in the beginning when they found of Harry died but im so happy Severus had a chance to fix the past! I’m so looking forward to the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "in his Aunt and Uncle's care", "to his relatives' home", "bear any influence on his actions", "needed genuine eye prescriptions" and "there were many Aurors both inside". According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from sun-kissed" needed a hyphen. As should "weak-willed" Every brain cell I have is squee-ing at the thought of Frank and Alice Longbottom having recovered and Septimus Potion having facilitated their recovery. Yay at the Wizengamot punishing Dumbles properly for his causing Harry's death. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "are your parents here",go near pegasuses (or pegasi) and even hippogriffs", "Care of Magical Creatures class", "didn't even have Masteries", "word getting out that the ICW was prejudiced" and "help the Muggleborns acclimate". |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "it's absolutely beautiful", "they did hold Masteries in their" and "let's go up the stairs". |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "more than enough money from the books", "Halfway through he felt", "just in case with regard to Dumbledore", "but it's not", "get a takeaway", "didn't attend everyday meetings", "as the Supreme Mugwump", "had three friends in tow" and "keeping a carton for himself". |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "purebloods get educated", "had to do it downstairs in", "her name's Mishi" and "halfway across the world". |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "it was a close-knit community", "dad's going to come" and "cure for lycanthropy". |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "the Slytherins would take", "it's any of my business", "As is a teacher's duty", "it's why they kept a very close eye", "He owed Snape everything" and "From the odds and ends store". According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "overexcited" should be one word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "I do not want any arguing", "he won't before", "know it's Harry", "where I won't end", "it's rreally difficult", "I only have a rudimentary understanding" and "I think it's time". According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "so-called" needed a hyphen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! at how very possessive Luna was of Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am holding thumbs and crossing my fingers and toes and intestines that Severus' revelations to Harry go well |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "Septimus, who took it and floated". |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "retie Harry's laces" I have in common with Severus the rather going without food than going without coffee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "have you ever considered rewriting" AW! at the mental pics I got of Harry and the moonwolves' interaction. |