|Reviews for Revelations|
| ScarlettSapphirePens chapter 23 . 6/18
| Barzallai chapter 23 . 5/27
Great story, wonderful writing. I loved the ending.
| kalilje chapter 23 . 10/25/2016
omg I cried so much. this chapter was so sad that the tears just fell down my face. but omg I love this chapter. so pure, sad, and just lovely. It's sad that Rodolphus had to die, but it was great he did it for the ones he loved. omg just love this.
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/28/2016
I love the story but I'm missing some chapters
| Silver Orbed Lioness chapter 23 . 6/14/2016
Aw, you brought tears to my eyes and the smutty bits were deliciously written. I also loved all your twists, turns and cliffhangers. I love Lumione x great story!
| kittybug85 chapter 23 . 6/6/2016
this is a great story!
| CJRed chapter 23 . 5/28/2016
Wonderful story. But you are a Slytherine. That ending had me bawling. Thanks for sharing.
| CrazySlytherin chapter 23 . 5/26/2016
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/17/2016
| dancingkatz chapter 23 . 4/24/2016
I know I should have reviewed each chaptr one by one but I just could not help rushing on to the next chapter when I reached the end of one. This is one of the most interesting and well-written and asolutely wonderful Hermione-Lucius fics I have ever read. Your characteriazations and storytelling skills are awesome. The truth of Hermione's background is so plausible I am now wondering why it never occurred to me before. Congratulations on such a brilliant piece of writing!
| Sigrid Frost chapter 23 . 4/24/2016
Great story, enjoyed it very much. It's my first time to read a Lucius and Hermione fic. The suggested ending could also have been fine, but I'm glad you decided for a happy ending.
| BeneathAWesternSky chapter 23 . 3/5/2016
Overall a good fic, in comparison with others on here, but there were just a few things that kind of took it back a few notches for me. Just my personal preferences though.
| Alytiger chapter 17 . 1/12/2016
You need to write less cliff hangers. I finally found a chapter I can stop at and I needed to be in bed hours ago. I love you, but I need my sleep.
Who am I kidding? I will always finish a fic before I go to bed.
| xxxWhySoSiriusxxx chapter 23 . 12/20/2015
This was an absolutely smashing story! Thank you for writing it!
| OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Keep up the good work