Reviews for Stubbornness
Marieke chapter 21 . 7/23
It was so awesome! I loved reading it! You have almost the same writing as Stephanie Meyer herself! I loved reading every chapter. You did a really good job. This chapter should made into a book. The book written from Jared's side. I was really addicted on your storys. Thx for the really good and nice writing. Keep going gurl! Greetings Marieke from Belgium. 3 xxx
Guest chapter 21 . 7/4
Is it dumb to say I'm proud of you for continuing this story? (I feel dumb, but I gotta give you credit!) I've read a lot of half-finished fics, and it seems like the longer the break, the more likely the author to abandon the storyline. This is super well-written, also! I love your Jared characterization, and everyone is in character, which is excellent! (I don't know about you, but I definitely read fanfiction for the characters, and it's disappointing to find a good storyline with poor characterization.) Great work! :)
J chapter 20 . 7/4
Another great chapter!
I was the "guest" to ask that question about motivation and so enjoyed reading your answers! Thank you) keep up the awesome work, I look forward to reading what's next!
J chapter 21 . 7/4
Another excellent chapter! I was the "guest" who asked that question about motivation and so enjoyed reading your answers, so thank you!)
Can't wait to read the next chapter when you finish it!
rio15 chapter 21 . 7/3
So Jared finally realised how Wanda's leaving is going to affect their raids...and he quickly brushes it off. Heh, that's love I guess!

I liked that little flashback that showed Mel's tendency to make fists when she's frustrated, nice callback (callforward?) to the scene when she's waking up later on. I also like how Sunny calls out Kyle on his bullshit, I have to wonder if that was Sunny or Sunny taking on Jodi's personality? I wonder how similar they were?
Laura chapter 21 . 7/2
An other great chapter! Come every day to check if there is a new one Cannot wait to read the end of the story!
mgmdreamer chapter 21 . 7/2
Loved it and can't wait for the next chapter! I love getting a lens into jareds mind and you do such a good job with the characters. :)
Guest chapter 20 . 5/11
Love your work! Cannot wait to read the ending from Jarred's perspective!
How do you keep writing so well after such a long time? How do you keep motivated and into the story to give it such life?
Laura chapter 20 . 5/6
Great chapter! I can't wait to read next!
multibodoke chapter 20 . 5/5
I love it! And hated Lacey very much... thanks you :)
Autumn chapter 20 . 5/5
Amazing chapter, like usual! I think you've done a really great job of fleshing out one of the most ambiguous characters in the book. I never really cared for Jared at first. But reading your interpretation of him has really opened my eyes to how he thinks/operates. Please put the rest up soon!
Charmedisney4eva chapter 20 . 5/4
It's 're doing a wonderful job. Pl continue.
rio15 chapter 20 . 5/4
Another great chapter! I liked how this chapter mirrored how it felt from Wanda's perspective in the book. There was a sensation of time moving too quickly as so much happened so quickly, but not quickly enough for Jared, if his constant thoughts of Mel were anything to go by.

However, while I'm loathe to become a dreaded grammar nazi I wanted to point out that 'whom' was used incorrectly here. If the person in a sentence is performing an action the word should be 'who'. Eg: "Who made all these pancakes!?"
Whereas, if the person in the sentence is having an action performed upon them the word should be 'whom'. Eg: "And at whom did you hurl those pancakes at?"

I only learnt this myself recently so I was excited to have an opportunity to share the knowledge!

I'm excited for the coming chapters, what with all the shenanigans and goings on :)
mgmdreamer chapter 20 . 5/3
Despite your hesitations about the excitement I really enjoyed it and cannot wait to read more! So impressed by the way you seamlessly mimic the style of the original but in your own awesome way :) Keep it up!
Laura chapter 19 . 4/6
Best FanFiction Ever! Please keep writing! :)
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