|Reviews for Stubbornness|
| Rebakah chapter 22 . 1/21
Great thorough work! Especially impressive is Jared's holdout to the end of wanting Mel back and then the last minute love for Wanda that goes beyond appreciation. From the book you can tell Jared isn't really lying when he says goodbye, but it also can't be that he doesn't want Mel back for anything in the world because that wouldn't fit with the rest of his character. You portrayed the unsolvable conflict he must have been feeling really clearly. Hope to see more!
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/5
I found this today and I'm so glad I did. Thank you so much for writing this, I can't wait to read Mel and Jared's first interaction when she wakes up.
| J chapter 23 . 12/27/2016
Another great one! Thank you) hope you're having a great holiday!
| Pxnthesilea chapter 23 . 12/22/2016
Why are you so eager of making me cry in every chapter. This is cruel.
Oh god thank god I came to fanfiction today and took a little peek to se if you have updated. My favorite fix so far.
| multibodoke chapter 23 . 12/22/2016
thank you! I love it, but it was toooo short! I really want, no need to read what will happens next, when Mel wakes up and hit him... :)
| rio15 chapter 23 . 12/22/2016
I was a bit wary of the idea that Jared would figure out that Wanda had a death wish, but I think you're right that he would pick up that the only thing that affected Doc like this was killing. Good insight, I didn't think of that at all! I figured that he heard Doc's eulogy for her and it clicked for him then.
I liked how he avoided trying to explain why he had changed his mind. It would be difficult trying to explain to himself the feelings he has for a person that both took his love from him, looked just like his love, saved his life and who was about to sacrifice themselves for their happiness. I think he'd have to study German to describe a feeling that complicated.
| Evening Rises chapter 23 . 12/21/2016
Can't wait for the next chapter, that oughta be fun
You are going to cover the bonus chapter, right?
| CreatedInFyre7 chapter 23 . 12/21/2016
I absolutely love this story (sorry for not posting when logged in, having trouble with that)
Stories based on other points of view fascinate me, and the host is absolutely amazing.
I can't wait to read the rest!
| Lexie chapter 22 . 12/6/2016
It's very good I absolutely love this movie although I'm kinda more of a #TeamIan lol it's really good
| Laura chapter 1 . 11/16/2016
I am so impressed and happy, you made my day! Thank you for continuing your story! Can't wait to read the end! Xxx
| Pxnthesilea chapter 22 . 11/14/2016
thank you for destroying my life with this chapter.
i am literally crying, im sobbing so hard i cant even explain it.
gosh thatnk you for writting this.
| CreatedInFyre7 chapter 22 . 11/11/2016
I love this story! Jared's point of view is so interesting.
I can't wait to read the rest of this :) please continue!
| rio15 chapter 22 . 11/12/2016
I liked your approach to this chapter! When Mel's freedom was at risk he was irrational and incapable of seeing the hypocrisy of calling Ian selfish. As soon as the conversation moved towards moving Wanda to another body and freeing Mel he seemed to regain his paranoid mission head. Good thing too, if he hadn't noticed how weird Mel and Doc were acting this story could've had a very different ending.
Good job! Emotional dissonance is a tough nut to crack :)
| multibodoke chapter 22 . 11/12/2016
Hi, wellcome back... Im crying, for real. This chapter was AMAZING. Thank you!...
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/30/2016
This story is amazing! The host is my favorite book, and i was disappointed when i went looking for fanfiction. You have truly done both the book and the characters justice, and because of this story, i decided to finally sit down and write ian's pov. This stuff is hard! So yesh i just wanted to say thank you for writing exactly what ive wanted since i finished the host, and i hope you keep writing : )