Reviews for Stubbornness
Yuval25 chapter 14 . 2/22
This story is really good. I especially liked how hesitant you made Jared to be, how untrusting of Wanda he is, even now.
I liked the parts you wrote that weren't in the book, like how Wanda reacted to the dead souls in Doc's make-shift hospital, and what happened when Wanda was unconscious the night Walter died.
I am thrilled to see what Jared thinks about Wanda giving herself the same cut as the one Jamie has, and what he thinks when he kisses her before she goes to Doc that last time :)
Wise-wren-owl chapter 14 . 2/21
Always enjoy reading your stuff. I just want to tell Jared to stop being such an untrusting ass towards Wanda, but that's a good sign for your writing. The emotions are just the right level of believable.
multibodoke chapter 14 . 2/21
I love it! please keep going...
Maria210690 chapter 13 . 1/3
I am in love with your story! So good, i can't breathe! Hope you did not give up on it!
mairimama chapter 13 . 12/18/2014
I love your writing! The story from Jared's pov is so good. Please write more soon!
So Sorry From The Sea chapter 13 . 11/23/2014
I love this!
When reading The Host, I got attached to the characters. Wanda and Mel the most. When Wanda saw what Doc was doing to the Souls, I felt her pain. Even when she forgave them, I wanted to jump in the book and rip their heads off. ( I can see why Souls think humans are violent ;) I was totally mad at Jared too. ( I ship Jalanie and O' Wanda all the way) I mean, really? He was a butt. When he kissed Wand/Mel for the first time, he was a jerk-headed pig.
I love this fanfic because it shows how closed-minded Jared was. In the book, it clued the readers in that he really didn't look at the big picture, or that he looked at to big of a picture.
In your writing, you perfectly showed us that. This story shows allows use to love the characters agian, even though we never stopped loving them. It allows us to rehate them, even though after finishing The Host, we just stopped hating them. Like, for instance, I was having real conflicted feelings for Jared.
I like him, because he was nice sometimes and because Mel loved him. But, I hated him because of what he did to Wanda and even Mel while she was sharing her body with Wanda. So, while reading this (the last line in this chapter, mostly) I am even more confused. I hate Jared! He is such a MALE! But, I love him for the things he does for love. (Not in this last part of this chapter, though. I just hate him)
The only thing I wish you had more of was story. You explained it well, and I am holding you up to high standards thanks to the book. I just wish that you had more description. The reason for this is because of how much I loved it when you really got WRITING. I really do hope that you understand what I mean, or else I might sound like a brat.
What I mean is, when you wrote things that weren't dialoge, it was captivating. I would love it if you could try and write more in between the dialogue. I always have trouble with this. Anyway, Bye!
evi ive chapter 13 . 10/28/2014
this chapter had it all. tears, anger, love, lost, humor. can't wait to read more
evi ive chapter 10 . 10/28/2014
i'm enjoying your pov of jared. thank you
evi ive chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
great start
Guest chapter 13 . 10/13/2014
I love it! cant wait for the next ep...
multibodoke chapter 12 . 8/25/2014
I love it! please keep going...
jelanieandbedwardlover chapter 3 . 8/4/2014
I just found this story today! Oh my god! I love it already and you captured Jared's pain so well! Not many of the fans understand why he was as he was in the book or at the beginning. Next time someone doubts him, they should read your story! It's so well written and keep it up.
multibodoke chapter 11 . 7/31/2014
please keep going... I love it!
multibodoke chapter 10 . 7/22/2014
I really love it! please keep going..
multibodoke chapter 9 . 7/20/2014
good work! love it... please keep going...
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