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   lkuecrar chapter 15 . 3/9/2014 I liked the plot of this but your writing style is strange. It was almost like you were giving a synopsis of the events that took place instead of writing in present tense. I've never seen someone write a story from this perspective, so I just found it a bit strange. Other than that, this was a lovely read! |
| hannah.kaho chapter 6 . 3/8/2014 This story reminds me of Katy Perry's song Roar :) |
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/6/2014 perfect story its not too short and not too long. I like it a lot |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/6/2014 and Hermione was saved by the dashing hero... tobias the pygmy puff hehehhehe |
| MRSDARRENCRISS589 chapter 15 . 3/6/2014 I love this fic so much. I hope you do another story in this verse. Maybe one of their children in Hogwarts. Either way I really did love this |
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/4/2014 Absolutely LOVED it! Such a great way to end it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2014 I want to read this because I do enjoy the themes you've used in it and was looking forward to submitting it on tumblr to dramioneficlists' blog. However, I can't get passed the first chapter because of the spelling and grammar, especially your spelling of Scorpious when it's actually Scorpius. I think that you should definitely have a BETA help you edit this. You will probably attract more readers and I would then definitely read it. Good luck! :) |
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/4/2014 Good story |
| Pizziagirl chapter 15 . 3/4/2014 Love it |
| LuresaSWTOR chapter 13 . 3/6/2014 Ch. 13: Holybejeebers, had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! Thank god that rat bastard has been caught! Great job writing it! |
| LuresaSWTOR chapter 10 . 3/6/2014 Ch. 10: Such a sweet chapter! Well, the ending I mean. I always did think the Hermione and Ron pairing was too contrived and easy, so I love the stories where she and Draco get together. You did the violence part of the story very well, made me really tense and angry. I hope they get that rat bastard! :P Good job! |
| DramioneInLove chapter 15 . 3/6/2014 Sweet, though a thing or two got me on the edge: - Scorpious. It's written Scorpius, without an o! That really grates the eye! - Hermione is a Mary Sue here. Nothing is more annoying than a Mary Sue. A perfect girl. Well she's not! Otherwise than that, your fic nicely occupied a couple hours lecture. No drama, no terrible plot (well, if you don't count an insane ex who goes around slaughtering people ;)). Just a couple falling in love. Nice and fluffy. Thanks. |
| CGinny chapter 15 . 3/5/2014 Perfect ending for a perfect story! |
| IWillGoWithYouHarry chapter 15 . 3/5/2014 I enjoyed it. Good job. Although, there are some minor spelling and punctuation mistakes here and there. You might want to fix those. |
| SpIdErbite20 chapter 15 . 3/5/2014 Loved it. |