Excellent

Super cute! I really enjoyed the plot and characters in this story. The main problem I had was the switching POV, I think if it was all written from one POV it would flow a little more smoothly but otherwise great job xx

great story

Please don't write in POVs. Otherwise very good

Loved your story! I binge read this over the course of this evening and I couldn't get enough! I really enjoyed the dynamic between the couple and how Draco took it so slow in the beginning. You've also written one of my favorite Scorpius's!

Ohhh nevermind I see my confusion

Wait... in chapter 2 you said that Teddy pulled Scorpious into the shop, and that Ginny asked Hermione to take the three boys in the back. So why is scorp saying he wants to go see teddy at Narcissas house?

I found it kind of cheesy (is that the word? Not sure), specially Draco's character. Anyway it's been a nice story. I admire what you did with Astoria-Hermione talk, so intese and a mature point of view.
Hugs from Spain

This was so good!

Ohh yes, they made love already. What is wrong with Ron? I think he goes mental now

Wait, they are a couple now. Yay.
I guess Draco didn't know about Ron abused Hemione yet

Scorp will be the match maker for these two

I wish there are more dialogue between Draco and Hermione instead of POV
Awe these two are flirting. Scorp likes Hermione already

Awes Scorpius! Such a cute boy

This really good. I love your writing, and the story is marvelous.