Reviews for Making Uzumaki
Swdlvr chapter 9 . 9/28/2016
So.. Is Naruto going to make them into test subjects like any good Hetero...I mean Uzumaki? Cause I get a very Heterodyne feel from these Uzumaki.
Waiting ON a wish chapter 9 . 9/9/2016
I just have one thing to say;
absolutely fucking amazing...
this have to be one of the best naruto stories i have ever read... cliffhangers, crying, laughing, shivers of dread... and more laughing.
i absolutely love your story... whatever it takes; please update
RavenSummoning chapter 9 . 9/8/2016
Really enjoyed the nine chapters of this!
JimmyHall24 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Can there be a long well written fanfic where Haku survives the bridge.. and has a goddam dick? I swear to god its like every fucking fic Haku lives he has a vagina.

And I like Fem Haku. Sure why not? but can there at least be more Male Haku fics? The genderbending of this character is over 9,000! -crushes my scouter-
burnzy75 chapter 9 . 8/13/2016
I love this story so far! and am interested in seeing how it progresses.
naturefire chapter 9 . 8/13/2016
Please give him the chains! Please, please, please! Naruto hardly ever gets the chains (or any Uzumaki talent) and if he does its rarely in a story thats as well written as this one is!
NonSolus chapter 9 . 8/9/2016
Love this. Love all stories about Sealcraft. Good dialogue, deep characters, nice pacing and so on and so forth. Great stuff this!
Killer-Rubber-Ducky chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Yo dude, great story so far. Why no updates? This update cycle is almost as bad as Angel of Snapdragons update cycle.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 7/9/2016
Forgot to mention, also best work on the Uzumaki clan that I have seen, also most original
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 7/9/2016
I am seriously looking forward to what you do next! :-)
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 7/9/2016
Burst out laughing at Kakashi's response to learning Naruto knew pranking trap making
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 7/8/2016
Accurate description of Haku from Kakashi at the top at how she is a born and proud follower, and how the situation is complicated by her bonding to someone with Naruto's protective instincts

LOL on Sasuke's POV of Sakura and comparing her Kakashi and why he never mouths off at her. Also LOL for Sakura's "misunderstandings" about Sasuke and how he feels about her
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 7/8/2016
Strong if sad look at Naruto's mental state at the top. Also interesting and amusing with the clone POVs

Good work showing how much Naruto's pranking history benefited him, also a little amusing at how insulted he was that people would use "pranking" to kill people. Also enjoyed all the responses to realizing that pranking is useful
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 7/8/2016
Nice point that there must be more to Zabuza if Haku had remained such a kind soul

Using the Wave to show Naruto getting the appreciation he deserved, as opposed to after Pain's defeat, was ingenious

"frozen death"! Very nice wording!

Enjoyed seeing Haku with her own food addiction. In most fics it is only Anko and dango, this is new and amusing
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 7/8/2016
Original approach that while Haku was repulsed by Naruto's Sexy jutsu she did not get violent about it and acknowledged it worked. The way she praised him made Naruto happy too while also gently pushing him away from that technique

Like how you did the Hiding in the Mist too
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