Reviews for Making Uzumaki
Killer-Rubber-Ducky chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Yo dude, great story so far. Why no updates? This update cycle is almost as bad as Angel of Snapdragons update cycle.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 7/9/2016
Forgot to mention, also best work on the Uzumaki clan that I have seen, also most original
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 7/9/2016
I am seriously looking forward to what you do next! :-)
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 7/9/2016
Burst out laughing at Kakashi's response to learning Naruto knew pranking trap making
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 7/8/2016
Accurate description of Haku from Kakashi at the top at how she is a born and proud follower, and how the situation is complicated by her bonding to someone with Naruto's protective instincts

LOL on Sasuke's POV of Sakura and comparing her Kakashi and why he never mouths off at her. Also LOL for Sakura's "misunderstandings" about Sasuke and how he feels about her
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 7/8/2016
Strong if sad look at Naruto's mental state at the top. Also interesting and amusing with the clone POVs

Good work showing how much Naruto's pranking history benefited him, also a little amusing at how insulted he was that people would use "pranking" to kill people. Also enjoyed all the responses to realizing that pranking is useful
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 7/8/2016
Nice point that there must be more to Zabuza if Haku had remained such a kind soul

Using the Wave to show Naruto getting the appreciation he deserved, as opposed to after Pain's defeat, was ingenious

"frozen death"! Very nice wording!

Enjoyed seeing Haku with her own food addiction. In most fics it is only Anko and dango, this is new and amusing
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 7/8/2016
Original approach that while Haku was repulsed by Naruto's Sexy jutsu she did not get violent about it and acknowledged it worked. The way she praised him made Naruto happy too while also gently pushing him away from that technique

Like how you did the Hiding in the Mist too
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
Appreciate how you make the reaction for killing to be the Last Test, essential step I believe given how dealing with teen killers

Blood Stained Hurricane, very nice
E.R Man chapter 9 . 6/30/2016
Bro, you gotta update this! This is way-way-way-way-way-way-way-way-way-way-way-way-way-way too good to leave unfinished! Please?
Still Not Dead Yet chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
I greatly enjoyed the original version of this story and it has been a long time coming but I'm happy to have read this. Thank you.
First-Shadow chapter 9 . 6/14/2016
Damn, this is a good story. Really well written and the plot seems to be coming along great. Hope that you find the time to update soon. Thanks for writing such an awesome fanfiction.
reaver216 chapter 9 . 6/3/2016
this is an awesome story I really hope you update sometime soon
InfinityMask chapter 9 . 5/13/2016
Hey! Why are you didn't continue this story? This story is very awesome and in a way kinda unique.. I really hope you will pick it up again and continue the story! Good luck!
Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 3 . 2/11/2016
Feels weird that someone from kiri would complain about kohona's academy... Considering their requirement of killing their classmates.
That and their attitude towards bloodline holders
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