Reviews for Drawcia's Apprentice
1Thunderfire chapter 3 . 3/13
Oh wow, I love this! It's unusual seeing a story on here done in present tense and I think here it has been done very well. Your descriptions are highly vivid; I get a clear sense of Kirby's creation and the subtle danger he's in. A unique concept too, looking at Drawcia and her origins (although I haven't played the game sadly). I will continue reading! :D
LuminousMoonRay chapter 10 . 2/13
... I think... I think I need a warpstar buying in my life now... Would
D his (their?) Skin be yellow? Maybe shades of orange with gold? Hummmm...
LuminousMoonRay chapter 8 . 2/13
;_; poor Kirbs... He just wants to paint some stars, jeez.
LuminousMoonRay chapter 7 . 2/13
I'm sure she will never again attempt to go into what is known as the universe inside of Kirbys stomach. XD
LuminousMoonRay chapter 5 . 2/13
Oh gosh, for whatever reason, Kirby bouncing around and looking all pleased within himself is just to adorable...!
Magic Shuckle chapter 10 . 2/13
I didn't think the warpstar talked...but good chapter!
Magic Shuckle chapter 9 . 2/11
Hey, it's all good! It takes a hood amount of commitment to want to fix such a ploy hole! GG mate, and keep writing!
somas35 chapter 9 . 2/10
It's ok man (or girl, I don't really know) take what time you need. and good luck!
Galbo chapter 8 . 2/3
Yeah, that sounds like something Paintra would do to Kirby. I know you started this before Triple Deluxe was released, so great job finding some way to incorporate her!
Magic Shuckle chapter 8 . 1/30
Very nice! the only thing to say is that "his body was physically yanked..." had an awkward paragraph skip. Keep going!
Magic Shuckle chapter 7 . 1/25
Hey, this is a funny tale! Please, write more!
somas35 chapter 7 . 1/22
Im impressed with your creativity with this story. I will keep an eye on it in the future: )
Galbo chapter 6 . 12/30/2016
You used the Canvas Curse stylus mechanic to pretty humorous effect here! I just wonder how long until Drawcia snaps, if ever.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2016
SO AWESOME! Please do more, this story is just so cool!
DustinWayneWood chapter 5 . 10/4/2016
I like Drawcia's angle here. Instead of bending Kirby to her will forcibly, she'll do it in a bit more of a creative tone. (And less harmful)
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