|Reviews for Masen Manor|
| Bakergrama chapter 28 . 19h
OMG! I do so love this story...I love this Edward and Bella...and Alice is simply amazing!
| Bakergrama chapter 23 . 1/21
The very first paragraph has Edward running because of the lust
Jasper throws out and “he can’t help it”...sorry, but I think if Bella and Edward separated from each other to help Alice then the least jasper could do is stop the lust...if he can control other crap around him and them he should be able to co tell that...seems he don’t want to and just throws that in Edwards face...shame on him and Alice too...I love these stories, almost all of them but it seems like this stuff just gets worse for Bella and Edward and not jasper and Alice...not fair...lol...sorry, just drives me crazy and they should have some respect for the two people that are giving up the most to help them.
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/14
WOW, Bella is a fucking moron. And why is she such a pussy? She cant talk about stuff? Its too hard? LOL
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14
Edward was a bit slutty while human huh?
| missmelly chapter 17 . 1/10
Just popping in to thank you for a positive Tanya. She was never much of a personality in the books, and she gets a bad rap in Twific.
| missmelly chapter 6 . 1/9
I just discovered your story, and it is so beautifully crafted. I am especially appreciative of the fact B’s blood does not affect Edward; I hated that part about the real Twilight—never made sense to me.
| Mette Krebs chapter 36 . 12/25/2017
Thank you for this (and the others) amazing story, I loved the journey, the plot, everything .. and felt sad to have to let them go xxx Merry Christmas
| Janina14 chapter 36 . 12/4/2017
I loved your story! The feelings between Edward and Bella were beautifully written, there wasn‘t too much angst and the Leah you wrote was a pleasant surprise! Thank you!
| Liz 1974 chapter 36 . 12/3/2017
Love It !
as far as seqeal I reallt think u should , have Edwadd & Bella come across a set of faternal twins ( boy & girl they could adopt them !
| BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Talk about late to the party...I can't believe I haven't read this one of yours. Anyway, I'm here now and ready to get lost in this hauntingly good story so far. Edward is of course a very sad character so far and I guessing he finds some hope in this Bella that is about to enter into his world.
| Fanslashtic chapter 36 . 8/25/2017
This story was like a breath of fresh air! I've found a lot of those lately, which is surprising to say the least!
You write beautifully and have such a good way of painting a picture when you read it! I loved the twist with the mind reading thing! ;P
| JustARead chapter 3 . 8/24/2017
3 deaths...b,a,r,em-all human. Whos it gonna be
| JustARead chapter 2 . 8/24/2017
Human b & a?
| Guest chapter 36 . 8/18/2017
I loved re reading this story again
Thank you all for working and creating it
| BookLuver02 chapter 1 . 8/11/2017
This is the best fanfiction I have ever read. I love how you turned something that could have been horrible into an intriguing mystery/drama/romance. I have never read a better pairing of any of the Twilight characters, much less a Bella/Edward pairing. This truly is a lovely story; please don't ever stop writing. -M