Reviews for Souls of Men by lola-pops
jillangel chapter 1 . 9/19
This is awesome! I wish it was longer, I was just getting really into it!
71star chapter 1 . 9/15
Wish this was a continued story...
Loved it!
alli62 chapter 1 . 7/6
I just found this! Really, really good.
jule2 chapter 1 . 5/5
Brilliantly done.
el chapter 1 . 3/21
Please write a sequel to this. This has potencial. But i hate the part that Bella was treated poorly and the hint of the submissive and alice alittle.
tff000 chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
good o/s. wish there was more :)
MyCleverAlias chapter 1 . 9/17/2015
Not sure how I even stumbled on this contest so belatedly, but I'm in love with this story. I know you have other things in progress, and it's probably not the highest priority, but if you continued, it would be amazing. You balance dark and light so well, and I think your take on the struggle of how a relationship would be tested under these circumstances would be so interesting.

Regardless: this was fantastic, and thank you for writing!
Atwiggs chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
It was a good story and I'd like to read more, but I guess this is it. Thanks so much for writing!
Treestar2509 chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
Wow! That was a lot. I can't even imagine being Bella. Very well written and very interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Fleur50 chapter 1 . 8/18/2014

Google Translate. French.
Montreal, Quebec.
hillybob chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Bloody hell that was brilliant I hope you won and continue
DreamofRob10 chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
I'd love to see more to this story. It was very good. I'm always on the hunt for a story that leaves me wanting more and this did it. I love Mafia stories. Great job.

jennerLbayliss chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Hey this story was really good I was just wondering if it would be ccontinued?
mariga79 chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
would have loved to see this expanded, Bella on her knees is like her in submition, something i dont think Edward wants, he wants her love...
KeeWit chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Good story!
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