Reviews for Hollow Beginnings
Mie779 chapter 21 . 3/30
oh wow this fic was great... love stories like this where they are till close to canon or at least somewhat close to timeliness and things happening in the show... a slightly different take on merlin... (but guess you wrote this some time before those episodes w merlin came out... but it really was a great plot you did here... and I LOVE captainswan in this story. .. the bond and everything... sad to see that you never wrote that epilogue.. that would be great to read that...
tyraleanne chapter 21 . 6/17/2018
I love this story so much! Please please please write the epilogue...or even continue in a sequel?! This is such perfection!
Capitaine Odette chapter 21 . 3/20/2018
Hi! I just read this entire story for the first time and I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved it. I haven't read any first person fics before, and you did an excellent job capturing Emma's inner monologue. I loved the relationship between her and Killian, and I really enjoyed the storyline and development there. Your description of their tethered bond was so vivid, and the final confrontation was really well done. I know this was written a while ago, and I have to say I loved that elements of this fic ended up coming up in canon later on (Merlin and the first dark one).
HCullen chapter 21 . 3/4/2018
epilogue? I loved this FF. 4 yrs later im still waiting! Muy buena historia. Felicidades!
Guest chapter 21 . 2/16/2018
Haha you were almost right about the origin of the Dark one! You even had Merlin almost correct too!
agentpiperh chapter 21 . 8/8/2017
Certainly was interesting reading about your interpretation of the Black Fairy not long after OUAT's decidely more evil version.

That was an awesome read, very imaginative and immersive.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/30/2017
I kinda want to stab Neal. He's such a hypocrite! He was engaged to someone else like two weeks ago! And he was so awful and patronizing when Emma was suspicious of her, convinced she was just jealous, and now he's trying to make decisions for her? Such an ass.
Angels-heart1 chapter 21 . 4/27/2017
Sweet! Great story!
CShipper chapter 21 . 3/30/2017
That was a beautiful ending! And I love how many elements of this actually happened, like being true love, the proposal, Merlin coming. Really well done and I loved the proposal and they were able to get the Dark One Curse back where it belongs. Thanks for this, I really enjoyed it!
CShipper chapter 17 . 3/29/2017
Yes, they are true love! I mean, I knew, but the confirmation always makes me so exited! And Killian has magic, too, now! I loved the introduction of Merlin, that was awesome!
CShipper chapter 14 . 3/29/2017
Haha! The proposal joke, and Emma is totally considering it in the future. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
CShipper chapter 13 . 3/28/2017
Oh, this is definitely heating up! Sorry for the lack of reviews on the previous chairs, just had to keep reading. I love how Emma finally accepted the bond between them and she's in love with Killian! I wonder who is out against Killian and I really hope it's not Gold because Emma is with him instead of Neal.
CShipper chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
Interesting to say the least! And Emma saving Killian with her magic, I can't wait to see how this goes down! I love it, and I hope everyone else gets out unscathed and they can get Henry back without any problems. And Gold knows a little about what's going on with Emma and Killian, I wonder what type of bond they formed!
Tigana1968 chapter 21 . 3/17/2017
Absolutely fantastic, loved it. Thank you :)
Tigana1968 chapter 15 . 3/17/2017
You are doing a Fantastic job writing ! Keep it up
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