Reviews for Not Ready To Die
Unknown soldiers chapter 1 . 1/22
You have peeked my interest
we the clones chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
pls update this!
I want to see what happens next!
SpartanReconS297 chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Yeah, please continue this story so far, I'd love to see how it changes and I'm sure plenty other readers would as well!
Does Jaune have grimm transformation powers?
Does it slowly start to take over his consciousness?
WHAT HAPPENS?!
I MUST KNOW!
Trapper Mann chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
This is a really good start and I would love to see more.
Invisibl3ssed chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
Avenged sevenfold... Nice reference plus the story was also pretty good. Here and there's.
the vault hunter chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
I liked it. Don't know why you don't but yeah, it was good.
Shadow67100 chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
A7X. Nice.
Nero The Insane chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Thus a new bad tale of badassery starts...Keep it comin!
hellborn-saint chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
A bit quick on the resurrection but its nice none the less. Hoping for a second chapter
xchrispx chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Good start so far but it could use a bit more detail. Specifically during the emotional parts, like what the characters were thinking and feeling.
venshade1 chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
you have to continue this knowing that he is alive dammit!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Nice story, I'm interested to find out what happen next.
XandricTheBeater chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Is this a Grimmdark AU story? Cool! I always figured Jaume would be a Death Stalker, or at least Ruby would be a Beowolf, but it's still awesome. Although, as good as the pretense and set up are, it does seem more than a bit rushed. If you want to work on it, try to add a bit more to the scenes. You can NEVER have too much detail.