|Reviews for Celebrations|
| cmjb91 chapter 20 . 1/26
I just completed your story and loved it :) I look forward to the sequel so much
| CleoArrow chapter 20 . 12/5/2014
I love your fluffy stories! I always find myself getting roped into them and having to finish each one. I actually appreciate Raven and Beast Boy not drinking; they learned from their first experimentation with alcohol. As always, I enjoyed it all.
| krostovikraven1 chapter 20 . 9/28/2014
Aww such great ending, i really loved this story, it was funny and fluffy and even had a lesson to be learned, the best moments are better experienced when one is sober. Please continue writing, i have made it my ultimate goal to read all your stories and can't wait for the update on the most recent ones.
Much love and appreciation for your work and good luck.
| krostovikraven1 chapter 19 . 9/28/2014
Aww finally a confession. Hopefully Robin's and Stars confession goes as smoothly. Loved the chapter, very, very fluffy.
| krostovikraven1 chapter 5 . 9/27/2014
Your stories are freaking funny, i enjoy them very much, especially the awkward moments you put them in. Frustrating sometimes because i would expect them to just say something when they add so obvious but no complaints, i really really love this story so far.
| writerzero chapter 20 . 9/11/2014
Sweet. I bet even if he remembers everything, Robin will claim he doesn't. But, at last, Beast Boy and Raven are a couple, and that's all that matters.
| xXTheRavensNestXx chapter 20 . 9/6/2014
Love this story :) Would have loved to see Raven and Beast Boy drunk at the party though! I recommend a alternate ending of Drunk Mayhem but they of course end up together! hah
| Hate Eater chapter 20 . 8/27/2014
this fic meant to show them as normal teens. witch was well developed, altought i'm fairly sure Robin was starfire boyfriend in the show.
maybe you did it for the sake of the sub-plot.
Minor mistakes i found, and the story was good over all.
| tdifreak55 chapter 5 . 7/30/2014
Oh my gosh Raven smells like lilacs!
These are pretty good and I think you're going an appropriate pace.
| DragonCrusader chapter 19 . 6/1/2014
Forget the King of Monsters.
Robin is the King of interruptions. Every time BB tried to tell her, Robin does SOMETHING.
| Aronim chapter 9 . 5/26/2014
As long as you keep the girl-talk as adorable and funny as this, I'll have no complaints.
| Aronim chapter 6 . 5/26/2014
Don't apologize for interaction with other characters. Romances where the author forgets that there exists other people than the couple are usually crap.
Particularly TT romance need the other characters, 'cause a) they all live together and b) half the fun is seeing the characters tease and react to each other.
| Aronim chapter 5 . 5/26/2014
Too fast. I just left a review about patience and then you drop this on us.
Still, credit where it's due, there was a lot of fun bits in this chapter. But you've really hit Cliche City when you do the "someone gets their brain addled by something and blurts out compliments".
| Aronim chapter 4 . 5/26/2014
The dialogue is pretty good. Feels like you might be hitting your stride and getting a firmer grasp of the characters. However, you descriptions of Rae are too emotional. Raven doesn't get "livid". Well she does, but more for comedic effect than anything and I personally think she would feel more consistent if you described her emotions in a more "just peeking out from behind the mask"-style. She might have become more open, but she is still one of the most restrained beings in the entire Titan organization.
And you are not neglecting romance. Patience is most often what separates good romance from bad. You need buildup. Not just "wham, slam, we're OMG so in love". Go for the awkward confusion, that's the only way I can picture this romance.
| Aronim chapter 3 . 5/26/2014
The banter, while just fine at the end, starts off really weirdly here. That must be the clumsiest opening to any banter and flirting I have ever seen and I am not exactly suave myself. It got better at the end though, like the faux-hurt and such.
Still prefer BB to be the shortest one. That is kinda one of his characteristics in my mind.
Also, on second thought, the action in the previous chapter makes little sense. BB has been in enough fights and is competent enough to know or even instinctively shift to something that can take a bullet and survive. Like a boar or grizzly or, well, there are lots of things. So it kinda comes across as bad writing, forcing him to act completely incompetent in order to have Raven save him and be angry.
I suggest having her put up the shield even while he shifts to something tough, keeping her protectiveness and even keeping her anger (which is just irrational in this scenario), just further showing how much she cares.