Reviews for The Greatest Thing You'll Ever Learn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is depressing. The author notes are almost as long a as the chapter. I don't read them but i hate having to flip past them. I think I'll read something else. |
![]() ![]() Good |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best I've read! |
![]() ![]() Loved it awwwwwww |
![]() ![]() this is not at all how james and lily should be portrayed this is nothing like the real ones |
![]() ![]() There's this thing called "line breaks", I would have invested in them if I were you. Other than that, I enjoyed the plot of this story! Not too sure how I feel about your writing though, grammar-wise. That weird POV switch confused me for a little, I didn't understand why you did it, seeing as it didn't add anything to the story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! It's one of the first fanfics I've ever read, so thanks for writing it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() not all of them are against voldemort. there is a dirty rat among them... |
![]() ![]() ![]() TWENTY CHERRIES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I luv peanut butter too. Maybe that's why Sirius and I are so nutty. (get it, nuts, nutty?) To bad my school's nut free. only 3 weeks left. Wait, does that mean I can't go to school? And if I have a friend who's allergic to nuts, is she allergic to me? |
![]() ![]() thank you so much for having it be Romulus, Remus and Troy. I cant tell you how happy that made me |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved how you began the story! It was really nice. Interesting concept so far, but Mrs. Black would never talk to a muggle. She hates them. And doesn't James have hazel eyes? But those are just nitty-gritty details and didn't take away from the story. :) You're an amazing writer. The way you formed your sentences made it sound like a fairytale, no idea why. I'll keep reading! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha good one with cupid and psyche it's one of mine Favourite storys from Greek Mythology to ! 3 It's So Cute . And A love your story btw :D 3 |
![]() ![]() i DONT THINK UR ATHORS NOTES R LONG!i PERSONALY LOVE 'EM! i LOVE SIRIUS' CHARACTER!sO FAR SO GREAT!) |