Reviews for Yes, My Lord
cielxbassy chapter 4 . 3/2/2014
No worries can't wait to see more of this
promocat chapter 4 . 3/1/2014
don't worry-we expect more soon eoungh!
DLTM chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Bad formatting. I cannot read walls of text therefore I cannot comment on the content of your story or the style of your writing. You need paragraphs. Each time someone starts speaking you start a new paragraph. Please be merciful on the eyes of your readers.
promocat chapter 3 . 2/22/2014
nice start!love how sebastian is wrapped around ciel's little finger!
Licurici chapter 2 . 2/19/2014
Don't worry! It's not that bad! (God! believe me!) I liked it! I will read it until the end! :)
Blackdemon21 chapter 2 . 2/19/2014
I love reading someone's story when its their first one, it reminds me of when i first joined fanfiction and wrote my first story, but you may want to separate the paragraphs I suggest you try and find a beta reader, they could help edit your stories fir you until you get used to writing, well enough of my rambling, I'm not used to writing reviews like this, so I hope to see your next chapter, Ciao.