Reviews for When You're Nowhere
HeronFrayWood chapter 14 . 11/21
I think that u should take a break from clace for a couple of chapters until u get some ideas, and work on stuff like malec, sizzy and jaia.
As for clace, you should make one final thing happen between clary/Jace, like Sebastian hitting on clary. Also, you should somehow incorporate Jonathan being Clary's older brother. Maybe Jocelyn and Valentine had Jonathan, but they were too young so they gave him up for adoption. Something like that. But whatever you do, please please please please please please, I'm begging you, DO NOT GIVE UP IN THIS STORY!
person831 chapter 14 . 11/13
I read this story before and it hadn't been updated and i was mad about the cliff hanger but, I really like the direction that it is heading into. I love Jace and Clary and they are one of my favorite fictional charterers. I can't wait until you up date it aging. Something that could happen is that Jace gets better and then like a month from the accident something bad happens to Clary. She could get kidnapped of Jace and Clary get into an accident and Jace walks away but Clary ends up in a coma. Then Jace gets so depressed without having Clary by his side and he doesn't leave her side. Those are just some ideas that I had, you can today discard my ideas if you don't like them.
Chairman Church chapter 1 . 11/4
Oh, I forgot mentioning this. This is the first story I've ever read on fanfiction and I still think it's the best, although your other storys are pretty awseome too (; x
Chairman Church chapter 14 . 11/4
Hey I was the guest, I made an account (; thanks for the update! It makes me so happy you updated because of me great story! X
Mrs. Eatonlove chapter 14 . 11/3
That was amazing
Jling chapter 14 . 11/2
Great chapter, welcome back! So, where do you see this story going? Is time to leave their bubble and go out into the real world?
Guest chapter 14 . 11/2
Welcome back! Maybe something along the lines of a record deal and they have to go back to the city where Clary just came from?
Then maybe had a few hussies (kalie Aline sensation?)
oesteffel chapter 14 . 11/2
Great, great chapter! I was really worried after that previous chapter so I'm glad he is okay. I'm also very happy that he and Clary worked it out so easily. I worried that he would shut himself off again. So now that Jace just about showed everyone how he and Clary felt about each other, now what? That was bold though! I love the kissing! Please update soon, I can't wait! Thanks!
Madisontheresa chapter 14 . 11/2
Yay this was super cute! Thanks for the update. I'm glad that goof ball only broke his leg ugh.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/2
I've really enjoyed this story! It is great, but as for ideas, you could have Simon enter some of her Art into a contest as a ploy to get her to come back to Brooklyn with him for a month and see how Jace feels about that
LOVERGIRL chapter 14 . 11/2
Update soon!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/2
Maravilloso capitulo, me alegraste el día. Como siempre seguiré esperando con ansias un nuevo capitulo. 3
ThatBlondeALB chapter 14 . 11/2
XDlove TMI DP chapter 14 . 11/2
Jace using Clary as his slave because it is her 'fault' or you can have them betting and the winner gets a week where the other one has to be their slave sorrrrrrrryyyyyyyyy you can see I would like the idea if one of them was used as a slave for the other... but on a happier note you can also let them have a holliday in the woods with floothing lights( I don't really know how to write that) and a bonfire... I like this story and I would love it if you would update more regulary thanks XD
wills porn toast chapter 14 . 11/2
Do what everyone does and wing it! This story is so good! I love the clace so much! Please keep going and updating reguarly!
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