Ohhh, what a sweet, sweet, story! No unnecessary plot devices and confusions and complications; just a sweet adorable story, similar yet different to the original P&P.
Thanks for writing such a nice story - it made my day and made me smile. Dear Mr Burns indeed!
Though I must point out, you say in your summary that the characters belong to Jane Austen. I thought I should tell you that they do not; Jane Austen or her publishers etc do not have a copyright since her works are in the public domain; one may write a fanfiction of P&P and sell it and make a profit. Just thought it should be mentioned.
I wish you would write more fanfics - I'm sure they would be delightful and I should dearly wish to read them. You have a wonderful writing style and a great sense of how to portray the era
thanks again!
xx

Absolutely loved this. I really liked the match between Mary & Mr Collins and that Wickham never got the grand, theatrical revenge he plotted - very fitting!

lovely story! great mix between dialogue, descriptions and characters' thoughts! célia

hi! just a quick note to tell you that I've been reading and LOVING your story! thank you for taking the time to write and share it here with us! hugs from Portugal, Célia

opps! Did you mean to say Charlotte? I didn't think she was there.

Thank you for sharing! I really enjoyed the story.

I really enjoyed this story!

Take out Charlie's name and change one do to due. But, I'll am enjoying this more assertive Darcy.

Robert Burns?

I caught a slip-up: "She not unfrequently stopped at the parsonage, and had a few minutes' conversation with CHARLOTTE" not Mary.

Very lovely story.

This story is very well written, and I just wanted to stop & comment that I particularly enjoyed the end of this chapter (Both were determined...). I'm really glad you didn't spend a lot of time dwelling on angst, since it doesn't belong in Jane & Bingley's relationship!

I LOVE IT
That's all I have to say.
And your vocabulary is pretty much spot on in terms of how close it is to the actual book! Makes it seem like... a deleted scene from the book, or something! :D

Lovely...I thoroughly enjoyed your version of this story. It did not diss appoint and met my expectations. Very pleasant and complete. Very nicely done.:)

I'm pretty sure ROBERT Burns wrote that rather than John.