Sweet.

Whew...I'm glad their misunderstanding wasn't drawn out.

I love your Darcy and Elizabeth interactions.

This was a lovely variation. It was actually the first variation of P&P that I tried and I am pleasantly content with the whole of it. You kept the style of writing fairly close to the original, which I know cannot be an easy feat. Excellent work!

Ahhh so well written!

There should not be charlotte in hunsford in this story!

This was lovely and so well written. You had me an emotional wreck as the tension between the two of them rose. Loved it

This was an adorable story! lovely!

This has got to be one of the most well written, faithful iterations of Miss Austen’s work. The writing style was so like the original, and the characters completely in character. Thank you for this wonderful work!

Loved it

Beautiful story!

Your story was very well written and I enjoyed it. I loved the courtship in the last chapters and the resolution of the misunderstanding. I think my favorite chapter was chapter 14, probably because of the delightful kisses! Thank you for the story!

Delightful story, faster HEA, not too much angst! Thank you

I love this story because you actually show Elizabeth being vivacious and cheerful, we actually see what appeals to Darcy and why he loves her. Too many fics only show her being resentful, unkind or uncharacteristically meek. You do a good job characterising both of them where he still screws up allowing his introspection and improvement, but it's not such a disaster because they're already in love. Thank you for this wonderful story.

Cute. A little too much of the original dialogue at times but charming enough.