Funny how Mrs. Bennet can pick up on the annoyances of Mr. Collins She understand that HIS "bobby and chatter" could drive Mr. Darcy away but is oblivious to her own irritating behavior! Hers is much worse-Elizabeth has no obligation to see Mr. Collins after she's married, her mother will be harder to avoid!

Love the poetry references! I'm actually looking forward to Mrs. Bennet's schemes to get Lizzy and Darcy together!

Heureuse de voir que M Bennet se préoccupe du confort de ses filles.
Mme Bennet pourrait reconnaitre elle aussi qu'elle a mal jugé M Darcy, ce serait un confort pour tout le monde

Really good! I cant wait for the Next chapter
Thank you for a good story

GO, GO, GO!

Oh this update was lovely! I can't wait to read more!

I just read the first two chapters. I like your Mr. Darcy very much. Great to see Mr. Bennett actually take some action.
I'm so glad your going to keep going. It's very well written.
Thanks,
Jackie

Thanks for the new chapter! Can't wait for more!

Very much enjoy your story.

I really hope Wickhams habits will come to light before he can do any serious damage to the Bennets. Also, it would be great if Mr Bennet properly disciplined Lydia and Kitty and maybe educated them and stopped them going to parties?

This is a really really really great story.

what a wonderful interaction you have written between Darcy and Elizabeth! it is exactly as they would have spoken to each other.

Ooh I really like this! I can't wait to see where you go with this, though I like to see that it seems like Mr Bennet will take his daughters in hand. I am a bit confused about Elizabeth's memories of hurting Mr Darcy after he had tea at Longbourn. Did he overhear her ask Bngley if he's too proud to trouble himself to talk, or did she say something hurtful to his face when the gentlemen took their leave? I hope you can clear that up a bit.

I can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for writing!

Great chapter! I love how remorseful she is about conintually looking for the worst in him. Update soon!

Yay! Thank you for extending past a oneshot! Though the first chapter can stand on its own, I found myself wanting to spend more time in the company of this Darcy. Thank you so much, and I can't wait for more! :)