ahhhh i gotta get me some Burns now. Beautiful stuff. Wonderful story, thank you so much for the smiles!

It’s refreshing to have them clear the air so openly and honestly. Nice chapter.

I love this story! By the way, you mentioned Charlotte in here around the middle. Supposed to be Mary. Anyway I love this Darcy. Thanks for sharing!

I have read the story before and enjoy it each time.

I particularly like Mary's initial response to Mr. Collins proposal. She started as she meant to continue, with her as the center of his world. I am not sure I ever made the Mr. Burns - Excellent, Excellent ... connection. I assume it was intentional.

It is hard to tell the early story from Darcy's POV . He has to admit his attraction and affection while still demonstrating his hubris and disagreeability. It is a hard row to hoe, but you manage well enough.

Thank you for sharing this.

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Richard is handsome on my mind, I dont know why haahahha

I dont know, but sometimes I found Mr Collins funny hahaha

A very different version of Darcy.

Bless you for not resorting to having Elizabeth call Mr. Darcy "William." So many stories speak about his given name being too much to bear. Gross. Elizabeth's name has 4 syllables and is never questioned!

I enjoyed very much. Thank you for writing. -t.

This was such a great story! I really loved how Wickham wasn't the main bad guy in the story. It was nice to kind of have him out of the way early on. I also really loved you're Elizabeth and Darcy. I felt they were very much in character and yet this was a different take on their story. Thank you so much for sharing this I really enjoyed it! You are a wonderful author.

So wonderful! I really enjoyed this and wish you had more written works to explore. I keep re-reading. Chapters 13 & 14. So romantic.

This was a really nice P&P FF. with Darcy understanding early on that his behaviour was lacking, the story has been adjusted but the reader will still find the main steps to their engagement.
À nice read’

Now wasn't that adorable. Thank you so much! I enjoyed reading this story very much and must thank you for uploading it. You did an amazing job!

i'm glad you sorted out Wickham early on and i believe this is one of the few stories i have read where he gets his just desserts. It puzzles me that despite W's running up debts everywhere Darcy is portrayed as buying them up but not putting W in prison. I'm so glad someone finally has.