|Reviews for Promise|
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/6
You couldn't have made the name ashlynn or ashley?
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/25/2015
This is an awesome story and I have a few questions:
1. When are you updating again?
2. Who forgot the promise?
3. Who remembers the promise?
| Gardevoir687 chapter 13 . 3/17/2015
Please update more, this is fantastic!
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/2/2015
Please update it's keeping me in suspense to know what happens
| serena.fennekin14 chapter 13 . 11/16/2014
please continue this its so good
| Princess-Boba chapter 13 . 11/14/2014
Whoa, there's a next time. But anyway, yay you updated!
| KarouUchiha chapter 12 . 10/20/2014
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see who wins. Keep up the great work.
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/18/2014
Ohhh I love this story! Please keep updating! Can't wait to see who forgot about the bet and who remembers! Also I hope it was major in a good way! :) Blessings to you! (So many exclamation marks :P)
| suntan140 chapter 12 . 10/17/2014
i hope ash wins
| Extended Experience chapter 10 . 8/12/2014
Oh, I SEE! :3 I am shipping those two SOOO hard, you can't even comprehend.
| LittleChomper chapter 10 . 8/12/2014
so i came to conclusion that gary is a perverted tsundere.
| TopazDove chapter 10 . 8/12/2014
Uhm...female Nidoran are light blue, the males are purple. You wrote that the F Nidoran was light purple. Just letting you know
| KarouUchiha chapter 9 . 8/4/2014
Great chapter! I can't wait to see the water ballet it sounds hilarious! Can the fact that Ash is forced to do it is priceless. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Extended Experience chapter 9 . 8/4/2014
LOLOL, the makeover scene killed me.
| LittleChomper chapter 9 . 8/4/2014
"smell ya later!" it's look like gary's catchphrase.. XD he said that in the game too .