Reviews for Shinanai Paranoia: Lock Down
forever122 chapter 2 . 2/20/2014
Oh hoo... Ichi is soooo close! Your right though. It sorta revealed Isshin a bit too much. No one questioned why Ichigo should call his dad either.
forever122 chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Interesting... I see what you did there with paranoid. Ha! How did Ichigo and Rukia find out that Karin and Yuzu knew Toshiro? Rough drafts, huh? Nice.
Ability King KK chapter 2 . 2/19/2014
I think this draft was used in the main story on accident.