Well, Hermione's definitely in the wrong here. I mean, yeah, losing your magic is terrible, but Harry's practically being enslaved in his own way to Gabrielle. He's being morally forced into this relationship, and he hasn't even thought of the drawbacks yet.

I just read everything ! It is simply awesome. Everything is. The characters, their interactions, the sex...
There is some kind of reality in your story, as if it was a nearly real situation, and not an over the top fantasy like some other fic... And the different point of views, that develop the characters even more. I loved the insight in Ginny's and Luna's mind, especially Luna, as it was something I read for the first time, and well, Luna xD
Even your Daphne is original. In fact, all your main characters are high in colour and we remember them. (And that makes the smut so much better )

So thank you so much for this amazing story, and I hope a new chapter is coming soon. So I bid you good luck writing it ;)

I dislike the premise. Too much stuff "forced" by magic, bonds, etc. The writing seems basically solid though.

Damn Gabby is the best, perfect mate indeed.

bmn mh

Ok I just caught up and now I see no updates in a year and a half? Pleeeeese update.

Great, now you've made Hermione into a whore. Using a dildo even. Are you SURE this has a place in romance category ?

"most of her sex was hidden in her sex"
Oh how eloquent you are...

Was there really a need to make Fleur into a total whore ? Was there ?

Hmm...Gin-Gin called out "Granger" at Luna's floo. I would have assumed whoever established the floo connection at the house would not have used such an obvious address. Since Hermione is aware of the current situation in the British Magical World, especially pertaining to "mudbloods", that she would suggested an address pertaining to her parents profession. Just like the Bones resident is usually "The Ossuary" and the Weasels (err Weasleys) floo is the Burrow.

Just my 2 knuts!

It a good story feel bad for Ron. Ron had. I idea hermonie like him. She never did ask him to slughorn party she said I was thinking about it. She sleep with his best friend lied to him about it and he the bad guy.

This is beautiful. Even if only for the Luna POV. The rest is quite good as well though maybe a smidgen less smut and more plot. Both are well written though.

Sexy indeed! Please Update! Update! Update! BlueLegoSpaceman

I have read the naughtier version on AO3 before it disappeared. Please write more, as this is one of the sexier stories out there. Fingered myself silly over Harry buggering Gabrielle!
Thank you - BadFairy

Oh god... that was a horrifc chapter ...the mind of a Lovegood is not ment to be writen... my poor brain.

I hope you pick this back up, and maybe you could add a warrning next time we get a Luna chapter, as while it I feel represents her so well, gods she's terrifying.