Como opinión personal puedo decir que la falta propia de iniciativa y decisiones de Harry lo hacen ver menos maduro de lo que debería ser gracias a los contratiempos que a tenido que pasar en el transcursos de los años, no critico tu modo de escritura solo opino que con todo lo que a pasado debería mostrarse decisivo a la hora de tomar desiciones.

Is this abandoned?

I like your story so far I would like to see how it turns out.

Hermione is 17 not 16 by this point of the story

Un Maravilloso Comienzo!
Me Encanto

Excellent story. Complex characters with strong and unique voices, good and consistent pacing, an interesting plot, and the smutty bits are well written, erotic, and spaced out enough to not become the focus or bog the story down.

Very unfortunate that it seems to be abandoned, I would have loved to see where you planned to go with this.

What an incredible read.

Characterization on point, nothing felt forced or rushed, dialogue was fantastic, intimate scenes were hot as hell, and such a novel and unique storyline!

This instantly became one of my top 5 favorite stories on this website, and it's not close. I found myself dreading the last chapter because I knew it wasn't finished.

Thank you for sharing this story!

for abandoning this you should be subjected to the perminant b-hole boil curse -_-

This was fantastic. While of course the smutty content was a joy to read - you clearly have a talent, the fact that you've created nuanced, developed and distinctive characters, and a slow burning plot that I've honestly never seen before in this fandom, was a wonderful reading experience. I notice it's been some time since this has been updated, and it pains me to realise that this may be all I get to read of your work, and of this story. While I would love to beseech you to continue this, I know how real life works, and can recognise that other commitments, motivations etc can lead to things simply never being finished. I would love to see how things work out with your unique take on the newly introducted Daphne, and will likely spend some time wondering who else would join the coven, and how the world would react to it. All I can say then is thank you for this story as it is, and if you ever write more of this, or any other works I will be very happy to read them also.

Kindest regards!

Simon Mountney

Really do hope you one day return to finish this story.

This story is amazing. I've read it through multiple times. The characterization are perfect. I really like Ginny, and the way you incorporated the primary bond to Gabi and worked in the other girls, especially Hermione from the FWB angle, but somehow still kept Ginny as the primary romantic interest is amazing. Please please please continue!

Will this be being continued? A very enjoyable read.

look I'm sorry but I don't understand baguette can ya speak prope so I can understand?

He never peed!

This must continue!