|Reviews for The Shadow of the Wizarding World|
| XxSweetAngle84xX chapter 1 . 6/16
I wish this was complete
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/30
That stubby can get it up line i could not stop laughing for 5 minutes. Good marauding joke omg that the best!
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/25
Spelling error in context of the sentence...
"The boy saw her give a nod of accent..."
The correct spelling should be assent, as in assent to do something, not accent as in he speaks with an accent.
| Spazzman29 chapter 27 . 5/22
I know this story has most likely been abandoned but I'm not too sure if that's a good thing or not. I have no idea where it is going but it has steadily been getting more and more ridiculous,
| Spazzman29 chapter 16 . 5/21
I hate stories that just has Harry hand everything to Hermione on a silver platter.
| animal lover13 chapter 27 . 5/19
Please update soon. Its been over a year.
| Stefifi Heisenberk chapter 3 . 5/9
A bit of trivia. since the golge houses acount is in istanbul wich is in turkey i belive thr writer ment to say Gölge, in turkish it means shadow, so Harry's mom belongs to the house of shadows. I don't know what ur going to do but i realy want to see more.
| Epoli chapter 27 . 5/1
It's been a year since this story last updated, so I'm to assume it's discontinued. Looks like the story got AK'd, aye? All kidding aside... No matter where you are in life, I hope you're doing well. Have a blessed day.
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/19
A nice story
Hope for more
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/19
A nice story
A few spelling mistakes
Thanks for sharing
| Snaggledog chapter 10 . 3/28
I like the premise of this story. Although some of the plot lines have been used a lot I still enjoy them. I like what you have set up and where your story is going.
However, I am going to stop reading here. There are so many mistakes with wrong words usage, bad spelling and improper grammar that I am not enjoying it. I suggest that you reread each chapter again before you post it.
| Phillies2 chapter 20 . 3/26
I believe you should make dobby being a pirate story. maybe a one-shot. It was a great Omake, I hope there is more in a future chapter
| Phillies2 chapter 13 . 3/26
it is unfortunate he gave up quid ditch just because the twins are beaters on the team, he should have chose to rise above them. Also Percy said that to him, not the other 3. Also why would he care if the Weasley started a feud with House Potter? It's not like the Weasleys have any standing in the wizarding world
| Phillies2 chapter 6 . 3/26
I think your Beta needs some work, first you accidentally said Harry was 14, he is twelve since it is the beginning of July. 2nd- talking to Slughorn to live through, not there 3rd- its a plea deal, not a please 4th- Bones- does the defense, not dense. Other than that I thought the trail went well, surprised the revealing of Volemort's real name didn't carry a bigger commotion
| Phillies2 chapter 3 . 3/26
Godric's Hollow, it's the only mistake I saw, but it annoyed the hell out of me. Also it was hilarious when he basically said, why the fuck was I there? what is powering those fucking wards? I think I reread those lines at least 5 times. Great start