Reviews for Land Before Time: Time of Great Giving Retold
AllegroGiocoso chapter 18 . 1/14
Nice to see the development during Volume 3 come into full bloom here! Aylene’s reflections are also really nice to see too. Will be interested to start Vol. 4 tomorrow!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 17 . 1/13
I like this last part of the movie a lot more with actual dialogue replacing a simple narration. Like the interaction with Aylene and Hyp too, and really like the character change in Derek showing up with time … Wonder if he will be coming back in any more of the sequels? Love how Littlefoot is helping to show them how much they care about each other too. Sad to see this story ending, but happy too, knowing that another adventure is just about to begin!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 16 . 1/12
Nice touch to have Derek speak the sharptooth language too. Ah, interesting to see the documentary come into play here and focusing on getting the raptors off balance! Like how you made the sharpteeth so elusive too, really shows the difficulty of the scene. The dialogue was also neat too.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 15 . 1/11
The Topps reflection scene in particular is nicely written in this chapter, and nice way of interjecting Derek into it too. The sharptooth conversation is also really tensing up the atmosphere nicely too, and great cliffhanger at the end.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 14 . 1/6
Happy to see Mr. Threehorn’s gratefulness to Derek and Aylene. Nice alternate retelling of the Kids Like Us scene too.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 13 . 1/5
Nice touch with adding the ash in there, really helps with the realism. Great to see Aylene and Derek actually working together well here too, and seeing him growing increasingly respectful of her. Nice twist with the ocarina too. Glad to see Derek is coming to appreciate the LBT world too!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/3
Not sure how much I appreciate Derek's appearence...hopefully she makes him stay home next time...
AllegroGiocoso chapter 12 . 1/4
Nice twist to make the chase more intense! Pleasing to see these events through a fresh light.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 11 . 1/3
Lol, just realized how funny the word clubhouse would be in LBT universe considering the closest word used there is clubtail… As always, the extra lines are really funny and good too, and the lines you omit are often the least compelling or necessary lines in the original movie IMO. Really like incorporating the Pterano scene here, this is bound to make Novel 7 really interesting.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 10 . 1/2
Really interesting change of tone with the water scene by changing the dialogue and making Littlefoot much more hesitant and aware, yet keeping the events basically intact. Love how Littlefoot is being a great supportive friend with Aylene and Derek’s relationship too.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 9 . 1/1
Nice to see Derek interact with Littlefoot: maybe it’ll start getting him feeling better with Aylene visiting the LBT world. Littlefoot’s such a good listener too. Hahaha, love Derek’s comment pointing out how mature Littlefoot is for his age! Love how it looks as though Littlefoot is going to help their relationships improve as well.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 8 . 12/31/2016
Really nice and convenient that Aylene and Derek can get their own water – was wondering how they would impact the water shortage! Nice conversation the others have of being interested in going to Aylene’s world. I really like how you naturally inserted this scene before an actual movie scene and how easy the transition flows. Nice motive explaining Hyp’s meanness too. Now this was an unexpected twist having Aylene be the one caught “wasting water”. Really like how Aylene had to explicitly tell Cera to go too before she did. This final conflict between Aylene and Derek is really touching and shows just how much Aylene cares about the GOF. Very nicely done! Now this ending seems to have a lot of great possibilities! Nicely engaging writing style you have, especially with adding additional scenes while leaving the movie’s events as intact as possible.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 7 . 12/30/2016
The light arguments between Derek and Aylene are fun to read. Love Littlefoot’s perspective on Derek as well. Like how you’re incorporating Ozzy and Strut’s warning, really connects this story with both 1 and 2. Really interesting to see that Hyp knows about it now … not entirely comfortable knowing he knows the “secret”. And the size conversation was also enjoyable too.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 6 . 12/29/2016
Interesting to see the intro scene replayed without Littlefoot’s presence! Like the bullies’ targeted attacks at Aylene and like how Aylene’s so easily able to hit back at them. The tension between Derek and Aylene is also really interesting to watch. Really interesting how the time scales are different. Really interesting how Derek is seeing the changes in his sister too.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 5 . 12/28/2016
Yikes, Derek’s tone is really scaring me here! Oh wow, now this is a shocker that Derek actually wants to come! Didn’t see that coming. Wonder how Derek’s gonna impact things for Volume 3!
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