Reviews for Whatever I've done |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, it's great to see Sev being understood for what is happening to him, as well as being recognized for what he sacrificed. |
![]() ![]() I really liked this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved the story. I was so disappointed when it ended I want you to continue this. wonderfully written. well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() lived it |
![]() ![]() Marvelous! Beautifully written and with both Snape and McG completely in character. It's completely believable that such catastrophic trauma - followed by complete relief - could jolt him loose from his guilt and emotional pain and cause him to reassess his life and perspective. So glad to see him get a break, especially one of this magnitude. Your idea - that Harry's original attitude was an integral part of TMR's ability to apply such curses effectively and that a changed attitude would enable Harry to reverse them - was unique in fanfiction AFAIK. In fact, I've never seen a similar idea used in any fiction I've read. Very high kudos to you! Not least happy that he ends up with McG. Of all major canon characters I think he fits best with her. Given the longevity of magicals - which so many ficcers forget - the age difference is unimportant. (Wouldn't mind at all, though, seeing fics that expanded the role of and got him together with Amelia Bones.) Thank you very much! |
![]() ![]() Im wordless it was perfect and so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, it made Snape appear much more approachable and far less Snappy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What about Muggle medicine ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since Severus Snape deserves all the lovies he can get, I approve heartily of this story, even if he did have to suffer terribly in the beginning. I've never thought of your pairing, either, but the new dimension to the pair's friendship grew organically. I wonder how these events changed the war. Voldemort may regret antagonizing Snape's Slytherins. Most students in the rest of the Houses were already against him, now the ruthless and sneaky ones know they won't be isolated if they do the same! One spy uncovered could lead to the development of a spy network. I know, not where you were going with this, but I always seem to find weird angles in minor plot points. And Severus won't be bearing his burdens alone. Was there a time limit on the students' bet? At some point, the Professors probably will kiss in public! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! Thank you very much! |
![]() ![]() This was a great story and love the first part. Realistic raw emotions and well written. I like how things turned around for him. This needs more reviews. Great job. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I literally cried! Snape was my favourite character, even from the beginning. He finally got what he deserved, happiness, respect, love. For once he is everyone's hero, not just mine. Thank you |
![]() ![]() Fitting. Slytherin, and hope... |
![]() ![]() Why can't they just vanish all the bones like Lockhart did and the. Regrow them? Ah crap, just realized potions have no effect... |