Reviews for Shall Love Conquer All |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Now finish it please, you're almost there! |
![]() ![]() Pls wrap this story up |
![]() ![]() I'm sure that the story is going to end in about 2-3 chapters so pls update it's not much that we're asking for pls update... Maybe u have some personal issues but at least tell us if u r ever going to update it |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's Rude to your readers, not to finish your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you plan to finish this story? It feels like all you need is a chapter or two to wrap things up, one way or the other. Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW. That was an incredibly powerful chapter! I couldn’t stop reading! Your medical research was top-notch, as was the pacing, the descriptions, the characters’ interactions, the tension, and the emotional stakes. Absolutely fantastic, and far beyond the kind of light writing I normally expect from a fic. Brava! Well done. (Oh, and I meant to say: excellent description earlier of what it feels like to retain fluid at the end of a pregnancy. I lived through that myself, and every detail you described rang true.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job with the pacing and tension! The line “Darcy is alone with her” really landed. It makes me so much more aware of how delayed communication was back then! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m glad that Darcy is taking his cues from Lizzy. I never felt the nesting urge when I was pregnant, but I hear it’s fairly common. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, lovely perspective from Mr. Bennet! And Mrs. Bennet also feels perfectly in character and just as socially embarrassing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the giggling under the bedclothes, and the chance she had to observe him when he thought he was alone. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter made me smile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent, going to see the midwife instead of just sticking with male doctors. Also, nice portrayal of the Darcy/Lizzy argument. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, a great conversation between Lizzy and Mrs. Reynolds. And I very much look forward to discovering what is causing all these miscarriages! |