Reviews for Long Lost Son
RADyo chapter 2 . 9/25/2015
Small piece of advice... be consistent with names. If you wanna call him Don and Donny interchangeably, it's annoying, but bareable. However, don't spell it Donny, and later Donnie. It snaps the reader out of your world, which is the opposite of what you want. Hope that helps. Great story! I hope you keep going.
DragonReaperKing chapter 3 . 9/11/2015
update please
silverwolf chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
write more soon
VulpeculaKaora chapter 3 . 6/30/2015
Please update soon!
BurningRosethorn chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
Great start
Yoake no tenshi chapter 3 . 4/18/2015
love it i hope you put the next chapter up soon
Guest chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
Please continue this story.
Sakura9544 chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
Awsome so far please update soon
buslimpan chapter 3 . 1/11/2015
This is really good so far! Amazing!
JazzNProwl's sparklingAriaFyre chapter 3 . 12/7/2014
This is absolutely WICKED! Love it pieces!
silverwolf chapter 3 . 10/27/2014
write more soon
Shaddowridder221 chapter 3 . 10/16/2014
I really love the story so far but when will Splinter gonna tell Jack that he's his real son and what will happen when he finds out and will the turtles meet the bots? please update really soon alright i can't wait for the next chapter!
TFAN Override-Dragon Light chapter 3 . 9/30/2014
UPDATE PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE! Wonder about the turtles AND team primes reaction to each other.
silverwolf chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
write more soon
silverwolf chapter 2 . 8/12/2014
write more soon will Karai try to get close to Jack
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