Reviews for Long Lost Son
silverwolf chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
write more soon
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Crossover of ninja turtles?
n chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Its a very good ff
PrimusPrime chapter 2 . 3/9/2014
please continue this it is awesome!
Tundrafire chapter 2 . 3/4/2014
YAY! The next chapter up!... and I've already read it. Looking forward to the third chapter though.
I'm Yu chapter 2 . 3/4/2014
I'm guessing this is a crossover with the most recent series of TMNT?

Also, I'm slightly confused. Jack's wondering how long he'd been missing for, but when Raph is taking him to the lair, you stated 'in the past three days'. Is that just meant to be a time reference for us or was Jack actually aware of the timeframe in that part?
The Cobra2 chapter 2 . 3/4/2014
keep up the good work
pokemonsora01 chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Hey! Hey! Hey! Add the next chapter already! PLEASE!
Mystearica 'Primal' Fende chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
God! A cliffie! So...I'll be waitin'! 'Kay?
Arina
Tundrafire chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGER! You must add the next chapter soon. First chapter in, and I'm already hooked.
silverwolf chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
how will the turtles try to get jack to accept them as brothers and will Casey and April bond with him as well ( Raphael and Casey may connect with him duo to their shared love of motorcycles) and could Karai have a big sister/little brother moment or two maybe have her meet his friends and Vince and Sierra and have her ( and the turtles) tease him about his crush on the latter
silverwolf chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
how will jack react to learning he is the brother of 4 turtles/ninjas and a son of a rat will the bots make an appearance and will Karai learn jack is her brother and try to be close to him
silverwolf chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
write soon
Shadow Hunter chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Oh Cheese! This just got serious! But, what about Jack's 'Mom', June? Is she Tang Shen? Please update soon! -Shadow
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
will Karai learn about her true parentage (if in your story she is not already aware) and try to be a good big sister for Jack
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