Reviews for Past Tense
MsChrisAnn chapter 1 . 10/25/2020
Cute story! I’m glad Lee was able to clear things up!
strent23 chapter 1 . 5/1/2020
Dotty's: What are you doing in the backyard at this hour of the night? LOL. Love it. She's with Scarecrow of course! What a wonderful story. I am so glad I ran across this story.
I loved your explanation for Amanda leaving and the reason behind Lee writing his letter and everything that came after.
Truckee Gal chapter 1 . 8/31/2018
Poor Lee! He got blindsided by Amanda discovering the scathing memo, from their earliest association, which he never actually sent. Thankfully, she left it on the desk so he swiftly understood what happened. When the dust settled, they knew more about each other and their relationship was even stronger. A pity you wrote only two S&MK stories because you have a keen insight into Lee and Amanda. Talented, well-written storyteller, too.
AlaskanFan chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
This is a lovely story. Totally believable and true to character.
geauxtigersgirl chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
It was truly a pleasure to discover your story tonight. It is well written and has beautiful descriptions of both Lee and Amanda's thoughts and actions as they work through Amanda's hurt and Lee's guilt. My favorite line was "How had the promise of her warm smile, the sight of her beautiful brown eyes shining up at him, become the most important part of every day? And what would he do if he never saw her look at him that way again?". Well done! Thanks for sharing your time and talents with us!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Wonderfully written, you kept Amanda& Lee's characters spot on from season to season. Glad Lee made it up to Amanda. I'm also glad that you let Amanda made it hard for him, she didn't give in too quickly to Lee. Hope to hear more from you soon. Well done, kindly scarecrowfan
CindyDee chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Wonderfully done! I think you capture Lee and Amanda early season 3 perfectly (and early season 1 Lee as well).
eternal vampire chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Excellent story. Gave me the warm and fuzzies Need that here in Wisconsin. These days
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Awesome job! Hope to read more from you in the future!
spying eyes chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
I absolutely love this story. I loved how everyone in the bullpen glared at Lee. I felt sorry for Lee when he realized what he had done. I loved how he had to work to get Amanda to listen to him. Then when he told her that he meant what he had written, my heart went out to Amanda. I laughed at three different partners and Fred Fielder's threats to quit the agency if he had to work with Lee. The second letter was wonderful. I loved the ending. This is a beautifully written story. Well done.
Thorongirl chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
Great story. A definite favorite. I love how you captured Lee's exasperation with Amanda at first - the way you incorporated this scenario into the plot worked perfectly. I liked, too, that even Francine was angry at Lee and how everyone assumed that Lee was to blame. I always knew Amanda would have had an outstanding GPA! Got a chuckle at Lee's less stellar one:) The ending was cute too. I didn't sign in because I don't happen to have my password handy but it was such a good story that I just had to leave you some feedback. Thanks for making me smile.
Meg54 chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Super story! Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
That was really sweeet!
auntvickiadkins6 chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
This story is a great one..very sweet. Great job of capturing the characters personalities.