|Reviews for The Bound Snake|
| Vane3131 chapter 27 . 2/20
Now what happens? This is great? Aww her twin brothers
| Zedoc chapter 27 . 9/15/2016
This is wonderful writing, pleas dont abandon this story!
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 27 . 3/26/2016
Great, keep it coming. Happy Easter!
| ArsinoetheXXVII chapter 27 . 12/28/2015
So I'm mucking about- going through the SSHG collection as I've done- several times before- determined to find a new gem- and well HERE it is! I had to just read straight through- w/ a few breaks admittedly- but seriously it was hard to tear myself away. Admittedly, I love some of the plot devices that are often used for this pairing and I appreciate a well-done marriage law fiction (most of them however I find after reading several chapters turn me off with the OOC-ness or bad/boring smut). This is just- GOOD stuff. I mean, good characterization, dialogue, settings- laughs! I'm hella jealous of how seamless it seems and how you've managed to apply good humor every chapter while building this really dynamic relationship. The romance/emotional aspect is played out so simply- in just a few sentences- whether it be dialogue or intimate action.
And Severus- oh god- is he sexy. Not in that overt- what-the-hell-did-you-do-to-him way, but a way that makes it seem very natural after appropriate progression.
You've done wonders with Hermione too- able to make her seem adult w/out being overly experienced (I'm not a fan of the fics that seem to make her into a domineering and overconfident like she has something to prove when it comes to sex). Plus she still has her smarts and sass, yet can be unconsciously cute and emotional (w/out being whiney).
And I'm happy to see Lucius, instigating things with his typical swagger.
Oh- and Wulfric- how nice to have an elf on par with his master! He's a delight too from the quick comments and the whole sentences (he's an awesome "Alfred" to our favorite "Dark Knight")!
I'm sure there's a slew of things I'm glossing over- but ultimately this has been a great read for me!
I've enjoyed reading it from start to this last chapter and will anxiously await more.
Thank you so much for sharing this! Happy writing!
| Favreau chapter 27 . 11/18/2015
Thank you for the story, I hope you'll continue it.
| Guest chapter 27 . 11/9/2015
Can't believe there aren't more reviews! Don't let it discourage you. Please continue!
| StormAz chapter 27 . 11/6/2015
ack! More please? I know... everyone should have had their fill of these ML fics, but I love how inventive they are, and I LIKE this one... again, more please?
| bookworm661 chapter 27 . 10/27/2015
Write more please. What happens the next day? Why is the Ministry checking this two out? Keep up the good work on an interesting story.
| Anonymous chapter 27 . 9/15/2015
| PurpleBullet chapter 27 . 7/27/2015
I really like this story.
| wolfgirl19 chapter 27 . 7/19/2015
Please keep writing!
| catjumped1 chapter 27 . 6/10/2015
I can't wait to see how this story ends! I love it so far.
| Guest chapter 27 . 5/10/2015
More please :)
| mscarm chapter 27 . 4/26/2015
I'm still confused as to why Molly is in your character tags. Like where does she come in at?
| Karen Bristow chapter 27 . 4/26/2015
More please. Not just the nooky bits. The twins and Severus at the Three Broomsticks was a delight!