Reviews for Roy's Mistake
I lov this story chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
This is my first Royai fic i've ever read and I now have very high standards for this fandom. I actually thought May (adorable how you named her after Maes) was Elicias daughter but i did a happy dance twords the end! I loved this story and i look forward to future peices from you!

Haley
Sato-San chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Fantastic and very sweet, especially lovely is that they named their daughter after Hughes.

-Sato
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
I love this to pieces! I'd love to read more on little May's life with her parents, too. ;)
Dotdodot chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Awwwwww. That was really cute. I loved that. Please write more!
JeezLouise chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Awww, May's their BABY! *squee* Adorable take on Roy/Riza, and I agree with this scenario 100%! :DDDD