Reviews for The Black Lion
TikiKiki chapter 14 . 7/13
I don't have a problem with the way you write it's just a little confusing when you use "use" for the word "us" and "her" for here" but it's still readable and a good story. Hope you update soon
missymoola3999 chapter 14 . 3/28
Love this story and I can't wait for more. I also really love the way she can manipulate Joffery
Khailey Egen chapter 14 . 2/3
Please update :(
Raging Raven chapter 14 . 11/6/2015
This story is awesome and I would love to read more.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/11/2015
Wait... So jaime is with both of them?! Was not expecting that. Well played.
missEMbear chapter 14 . 1/2/2015
hi there! I love your story so far! but i don't mean to be like judgy/pushy or anything, but do you think you could go back to Chapter 10? having no line breaks makes it exceptionally harder to read (for me at least), it just looks like a super long paragraph! Sorry about that...but i can;t wait for the next update :)
shivermetimbers123 chapter 14 . 12/6/2014
I'm really enjoying your story so far and can't wait to see how the character of Joffrey progresses
Kaioo chapter 2 . 11/23/2014
So.. is this a Jaime/OC and Jaime/Cersei.. or is it a threeway?
nightwatchers2 chapter 14 . 11/13/2014
Why do you torture us, please, please, please update soon...
Lord Asmodeus chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Ah, should have specified gender of the protagonist. I am quite bored of overtly display of emotions, and vengeful females being the cause of many a kingdoms downfall.
Phantom- of- light chapter 13 . 9/29/2014
Please update soon keep reading the same chapters over and over I want more please!
Apersonwhocares chapter 7 . 9/2/2014
Honestly, I think that you need a beta, or you need to spend more time and reread what you have typed. I personally like your story quite a bit, but your grammatical errors and your spelling errors take away from the story. If you were to go through your story and correct the mistakes you would have a pretty successful story
Phantom- of- light chapter 14 . 8/28/2014
Is Myla and Joffery going to have a relationship like she has with Jamie or is it going to just aunt and nephew?
Dark G0ddess chapter 14 . 8/28/2014
im rooting for joffery/myla relationship i hope to see more update soon
HermioneandMarcus chapter 14 . 8/27/2014
excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
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