Reviews for Skater Boy and Boarder Girl
christag banner chapter 6 . 4/13/2014
HA! They are going to teach each other. That is great! And hell yes, I NEED his POV :D
christag banner chapter 5 . 4/13/2014
Aww Edward was crying to his dad? Wonder whats up with that. I really am dying for a EPOV for this story. I'm thinking you should give me little snippets of EPOV in our WWF chats :D LOL
Vanilla19 chapter 7 . 4/13/2014
Great chapter. Thanks for writing.
bornonhalloween chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
Wowza, this guy has been watching her in quite the minute detail for a long time! He is a very complicated head to be inside! Love how his inner dialogue causes his full honesty, no holds barred! Really great chapter! Thank you for the glimpse inside your skater boy! Xo and thx for your sweet rec!
simplynothingtosay chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
shecater chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
He's loved her since they were little ! Loved it !
ilive2read chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
wow he was an observant little fellow wasn't he lol. He just might be what she needs to bring her happy back. Damn Renee.
DataByteDL-FangirlinGranma chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
PAD, my Sweet...that was amazing!

I love EPOV in general...but this was a ping-pong type of banter with HIMSELF that was clever, funny, endearing (I let out a little sob when I read how he kept the lolly!), flashback of Bella's backstory as told from someone who can still see glimpses of that little sweet, kind girl in her!

It was the kind of "rambling" that actually happens in your brain, when weighing out a decision!
Kudos on the realism!

I'd like to hear her version of the same time period to understand why she started "bullying" him!

Well...looks like they're going to be a skating/boarding pair!
Oh, yeah...that's all sorts of screwed-up interesting!

Love, Hearts and xoxoxo!
chartwilightmom chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
oh boy edward has lots yo say, sounds like he needs to loosen up and relax a little, and bella might be just the person to do that, yes, tender, i'm sure she is berating herself in her mind just as much as him

keep it coming
RockRaven244 chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
Love it! Thanks for the update. Hope you are feeling better!
gabby1017 chapter 7 . 4/11/2014
Aw, so Edward's heart has always been soft and pliable towards Bella ... despite her bullying... Edward seems to have an understanding of her decline... Lose a mother, lose direction... With a little faith and a lot of patience, Edward may worm his way back into Bella's good graces... And all that taunting was purely attraction on her subconscious level ... The plot thickens.. I have a client whose daughter is an ice dancer... Oy, they go through partners and coaches constantly... always so much pressure... Love where you are taking this, PAD!
IccaSpriggs chapter 7 . 4/11/2014
I enjoyed this trip into Edward's mind. He sure does know how to ramble. He's already smitten with the girl. They are both in for a huge surprise. I'm excited for more.
Thanks for sharing.
OhGeeFantasy chapter 7 . 4/11/2014
Edward is a deep thinker. Or maybe he thinks too much? Any which way you slice it, he loves Bella. He has noticed everything about the girl since they've been little kids, and will try and put that smile he loves so much back on her face. I think this was a great chapter. Lots of detail, which I loved. Bella will be head over heels now that he is so interested in skateboarding. I hope that their smiles will last during the teaching process. For some reason, I have a feeling she will be more than frustrated with Edward and vice versa. lol

As for Careless Hearts, I'm working on B and E getting back together, if even only in the same room. :)
Thank you for the rec, I truly appreciate it.
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