This looks like it's gonna be good. .:-)

Like it so far. Love badass Bella.

Like this :)

Oooooh! *claps hands* This sounds very promising! Great first chapter. I loved the glass bead bouncing off his butt best and I'm really curious what Edward will do. Maybe...or I hope...he'll do Bella somewhere through the fic? ;)))) Your message in my inbox got me going and I decided to give it a try. I normally don't do WIPs anymore these days, because RL keeps kicking my ass, but we'll see how I can keep on. I like this start a lot and I'm looking forward to more!

I like it can't wait for more

thank you for the new story..I think bella got tore up, busted lip, did she bang her head?..I can't wait to see why Cullen didn't feel the shot..Is he a vamp in this story? until you explain

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Poor Bella? Poor Edward and his nice firm ass :D Lol

looking forward to reading this

You always do things right... This is hard nosed and tough... Looking forward to the soft points coming... As for Edward, he may very well be the gentleman who may have had enough...
We've been very out of the loop, PAD... I know Mercury is retrograde, but I'm sorry for being MIA...
This is good... I'm here with you!

This is shaping up to be an interesting story! :) Im glad to be along for the ride. I think Edward will surprise Bella just a little bit? Just my guess for now.

I'm hooked. This should be a fun story.
I'm glad you're back and can't wait for more.

love chapter one can't wait for more.

I love your storys cant wait for more

ut oh, great start...keep it coming