|Reviews for Travel Secrets: Third|
| Irda chapter 1 . 10/18
Just spent the last few days reading this series, and I love it! Sad to see it has been so long since the last update.
| Guest chapter 31 . 10/11
I really wish you would keep going. I enjoy these stories so much that I occasionally come back to them and read it all over again. I am always a fan of world building and the history and politics in this feel real and complex kind of grounding all the whimsy that was the original series. I am looking forward to harry finding his parents and his decision on what to do then seem like most important plot but I'm also interested in finding out how he plans to deal with Dumbledore and Voldemort. I really want to know what is going on with Sirius and if Lupin is in on the whole thing. I hope we can help get the plot bunnies started for this stories again. Thank you for writing it.
| all forms of fluff chapter 31 . 10/7
First time though-all travel secrets
You have a decent set of stories here, E4mj. While not original in the time travel you did however address an issue I always felt skivvy about reading. Sending a fully adult person back into their own body when its a child, and then expecting the reader to not gag when the fully adult mind sets about building a harem of what amounts to children from their perspective. Some can get around this by having the love interest also travel but I like how you constantly have Harry being aware that he is dealing with children, for the most part, and adjusting his behavior accordingly.
Personal issues with time travel stories aside, you have written a good set of stories. You've built a decent world with the rules clearly stated before you went about bending them. I really like the idea that Harry's parents are alive this whole time and how screwed up that would make a lot of the actions people took in the story the first time though. I have enjoyed the Slytheren politics and how you have built their system of house management, I can totally see the rich and powerful having secret society with its own rules and traditions separate from the normal school life.
Now the things I don't like are things I can't really hold against you as an author as they seem like personal short comings on my part. The first is I don't see this series is going or how many books it will cover. Generally in a time travel fic the protag is shooting for a specific goal on a specific time. In a Harry Potter story that usually means a specific year is The Year that the traveler is shooting to change. This third book seem like it is either gearing up to launch us into the next book or end the series. I can see either going down and as such am kind of lost at what to look out for. My other gripe is how long the story has been sitting idle. Not so much that it has spent over a year with no more growth and development, but more that I don't think there is going to BE a conclusion anymore.
Well as I have no idea how to address my gripes I guess I will end things here. Thank you for you time, and thank you for your stories. They have brightened up my day.
| jmw03u chapter 31 . 10/7
This is an excellent story! I am interested to see when/how Harry decides to become a Grey Lord. If he decided to do professional Quidditch that would be interesting too (although I have no idea how he would manage it with all he has got going on). Thank you for writing this!
| happybunny688 chapter 1 . 10/7
Omg please please continue this! I hope you’re ok, really hope you decide to return to this.
| flour-chan xXx SSS chapter 31 . 10/7
I adore this story saga you have goingI've read all three years twice over now coz I love them so much, I do hope that you might carry on with them because they are just absolutely amazing. I just know that I will always come back to reread this story againThank you for writing and sharing such wonderful work
| This guy doesnt have a clue chapter 31 . 10/3
| Lady Logos chapter 31 . 9/30
This is a phenomenal story! I read all three instalments in a row and am completely hooked. Will you be still continuing this?
| riverlover chapter 31 . 9/28
I am dismayed that the story has no end. This was a unique and well written series. You developed the characters is a realistic way while still creating mystery and intrigue. I very much wished to have had the opportunity to read the rest of your story. Thank you for sharing what you did and I will catch up if you ever decide to add to or finish your story.
| Loo chapter 31 . 9/24
First of all thank you for writing this. Second wow - wow - wow. I have no words for how talented you are. I've read the whole thing - and I mean the other travel secrets parts included - in like 5 days. Day and night. This is just so good. Small, hurried, wild thoughts I had while reading this in no order: Aww Lily and James are awful (I'm a big Marauders fan). This is my favourite type of Harry. WHAT?!. Dumblydore is a terrible man. Dudley is kinda cute. So is Blaise. Theo is a cinnamonroll. Daphne so has a crush on Harry and Blaise on her... oh dear, I hope this will end up nicely. Luna and Harry will never be the same again. Aww Hermione. One more chapter. I want a rational Voldy tbh. Damn Tom Riddle was hot. He's my secret fav. Apep is such a smarty ass (he's not Nagini though). What the hell just happened? Perenell is talking like she knows Harry traveled back. I think they know Harry's whole story. They must know. Harry must have traveled back and told them. Time Travel. So good. Poor Sirius. I like this so much oh my god.
| vickety chapter 31 . 9/24
Well, I see it has been almost two years. I hope you are well.
This story is genius. I sincerely hope you come back to it when you have time. Please. I find myself very invested in your Harry. Since he has given up everything to go back and try to correct mistakes, I want it to work out properly.
Thanks for sharing your stories. You are fabulously talented.
| vickety chapter 28 . 9/24
This is so well-written! You really are gifted.
| rowaparagon chapter 31 . 9/21
I wish there was more to this than there is... I mean we are only at yule and now there aren't any more chapters . I hope the author starts updating this again.
| fringeperson chapter 31 . 9/18
Really enjoying reading this. Hope you pick it up again soon! Thank you for writing!
| fringeperson chapter 17 . 9/18
That light-and-dark bit is absolutely FASCINATING!