Reviews for Little Angel
wootizzle chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
You're very descriptive in your writing. I like your use of detail all throughout the piece. It keeps the reader intrigued.
However, you do have some incorrect comma placements and few other grammatical mistakes. For example, 'starring' should be 'staring'. You did a good job, don't get me wrong. Just fix it up a bit and you'll have a much better piece.
ZearoSilveromi chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Pretty intense, but good job!