Reviews for Potter vs Malfoy: War's End |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wait Blaise being a.. girl? |
![]() ![]() Fuck this |
![]() ![]() i havent read the rest of the chapters yet and i have no clue if you are even active on wattpad anymore, but i would like to write this review now in case you kill off one of my favorite characters in the last chapters and i end up being pissed at you. I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THAT THIS IS OFFICIALLY THE BEST FANFICTION I HAVE READ! the writing style was almost the same as the original harry potter books, you did every scene, line and overall plot amazingly, and i fell in love the the characters and the story. the scenes were perfectly times, not one either too short or too long. the characters lines were all both realistic to the character, worked perfectly and there was a fair amount of lines that made me laugh. the plot was very well explained and though it was complex, you somehow made it understandable. i also loved the ginny/draco ship, its one of my favorite ships and i rarely every find well written drinny stories. you gave enough character development for everyone, and i love the concept of girl blaise. thank you so much for writing such an amazing story, again BEST FANFICTION IVE READ thanks and hope youre doing well, a reader who fell in love with your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant idea and thanks for writing. I liked how you wrote the relationship between Ginny and Draco in this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very very different and incredibly amazing! Those 2 non-existent weeks were amazing. Seriously, i don't know how you've come up with everything. I truly adored this story. The potter/malfoy banter: nothing could be better hahaha AND i loved both ships andd the depth you've into the characters and in their relationships. also, i loved tristan and hayden, wish i could've seen them getting together. thank you for writing it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my heart. What a lovely ending, bittersweet and full of love. I'm so, so happy this fic exists. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HNGGGG I AM IN TEARS. ALL OF IT WAS SO PLAUSIBLE. HOW DID YOUR BRAIN PULL A ROWLING?! and wowowo my need of Drinny romance was fulfilled. What are the odds we'd ever get one shots looking into how the couples all move forward from here? I'm curious how they begin to *date* in a post-Voldemort world. One question: in the Red Robes storyline, it didnt seem like using Blaise's blood was imperative to Harry defeating the Voldemort in that timeline. What did they do in that scenario? I almost don't want to read the epilogue because there's nothing after it *cry emoji* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving where this is going! My only critique is that their ages are a year off. Harry was already 17 at the end of his 7th year when he was expelled. They would have celebrated his 18th that summer after Inmind Street and he'd be closer to 19 at this point. Ginny would be approaching 18 since she skipped her 7th year and her bday is in August. Minutia detail compared to the thought you've put into this new plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ASDFGHJKL; NOT FAIR. We've waited SO. LONG. for their reunions and NOW they wanna be friends?! How weird that they've essentially re-written over the potential timeline with their kids and Red Robes and none of the time-traveling mattered but they still have all these *feelings* that are just unexplainable but they're acting on them anyway but also not acting on them ENOUGH FOR ME. Also, it's so trippy to go back to their threat being Voldemort and not a psychopath in Red Robes. Wondering how you'll tie-in Ron and Hermione now that Harry has new groupies. Great world building skills! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg ahahaha, Draco/Harry banter is THE. BEST. I get the logic of why they don't remember anything because *temporal theory* and such rot but UGH that was such an excellent non-existant two weeks to not remember! I can't imagine how Ron and Hermione feel or what they think is going on with Harry and Draco. One day enemies - another expelled besties. Hoping we get some Blaise and Ginny perspective next. I miss them. Oh, and Number 5 Inmind? I read it as "inn-minned" but if it's a play on Grimauld (grim old) Place and is actually pronounced "in mind" than wowowow you are brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so I can't believe this part is over because WOWOWOW what a plot! This is one of the few fanfics that gives Baise (male or female) any kind of significance and it's GREAT. I see I still have 5 chappies to go so assuming we're diving back into the "present" timeline with Voldemort and GAH I can't wait to see more Drinny shipping. P.S. can I just say I LOVE the new Draco/Harry banter? I imagine they'd have been actual friends had their histories not interfered at Hogwarts. Draco was bound to grow up some time, yes? Also, Harry shrieking "Too close! Too close!" was hilarious in my brain and I giggled out loud just picturing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need to know what happens but I DON'T WANT IT TO END. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just... how does your brain make this happen? Brilliant time theory going on here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() uhhhhh, what. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I FEEL A MIGHTY NEED TO VISIT GLASTONBURY. Holy crap, this felt so believable. So much research, so much entertwining of their fates. They've progressed SO. MUCH. and we're only HALFWAY through your fic?! What else could there possibly BE?! Incredible plot you've weaved together. |