Reviews for A Stain Covers Your Heart
choirqueen2017 chapter 1 . 7/14
Love it!
catwoman8940 chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
That would have been an interesting twist if she got the injection instead of roy. I liked this story.
silleoneff chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
A very good and thought provoking story. Thanks for sharing.
nrdhrd3 chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Awww!
Donna chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Damn this was delightfully dark! Well played!
JLC chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Wonderful stuff. I like a strong Felicity...
Otter chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Really very amazingly remarkable.
Kimmers chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Wow amazing fic would love to see u continute this n have felicity desl with it all
STarSHipper chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
I always wonder what would happen if Felicity been injected by the mirakuru. This one fic done it nicely, and the angst is so good! Write more fics...
lizzybennettdarcy chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Oh! So lovely! Way to go!
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Powerful stuff to be sure. Thanks for sharing.
sixcrickets chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
I really, really like this - its originality and unpredictability, that even the rage from the Mirakuru can't really change Felicity, that she accepts her new circumstances and adapts, that she kills Slade in the end. This is sort of gilding the lily, but in the interest of constructive criticism: it might have been nice to see a little bit more of what's going through Oliver's mind when he's pulling away from Felicity, whether from Oliver's POV or Felicity's. I completely got his motivation (I think having Sara talk to Felicity about it was a great idea), but I'd have liked to see it firsthand in Oliver himself instead of getting it through Sara. (I suppose it's hard to show a character's mindset when the character is pulling away from your protagonist.) But again, loved it just as it is - you're a great writer!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Amazing twist, love it.
x.imagine.x chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
I liked the twist you put in this to have felicity be the one injected. I'm not a big fan of roy getting injected... But I guess I can't change that! I thought this was very well written and well characterized!
Crimson-Kiss17 chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
flawless. such a unique plot line and the characterization was so on point. a wonderful read.
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