|Reviews for C R Y O F O M E N S|
| Dracopryde chapter 13 . 6/2/2008
i know you kinda dropped off the radar and i guess you prolly don't even check these anymore but well i just wanted you to know i'm still rooting for you, been hooked on this story since middle school though back then you still hadn't finished chapter 4 and i was only able to read the rest today but still, even if it takes another 6 years for you to post the next chapter i'll wait, good luck and god speed )
| Tiari Clovis chapter 2 . 8/6/2007
I don't know what plans you have for this story any more, but I thought I would read it. Put it in my favorites by the way.
I must say this is an interesting begining.
I did noticed that you spelled the woman's name both as Sara and Sarah.
| Reiji Neko Mitsukai chapter 13 . 9/22/2004
""Now- where to begin!" A pause. "OH YEAH! First off, I'm a god. Er- ageless only, meaning I can die, but please don't stabbity stab me with forks or something because that will HURT and I will CRY. Secondly- You're here to save the world! Yay! Now, let's start in on why that's relevant..."
And oh, how the two just stared..."
... No matter how many times I read that, it always cracks me up...
I'm going to fave this one so I can know when it's finally updated.
| BreezyBiah chapter 13 . 6/3/2004
hope ur life problems calm down. But were here and we'll wait for you. keep the great work coming!
| Raindog Bride chapter 10 . 4/3/2004
For some reason the next chapter refuses to load, so I'll review now! :D
Well, having just finished playing Dragoon (again) (5 minutes ago) (Credits are still playing) and am currently a tear-soaked nonsensical wreck, I thought now would be a good time to add my thoughts.
I'm reviewing so much these days it MUST be getting annoying, ne?
I love where this story's going. And hopefully I'll fight the urge the review everything you write.
| me mary chapter 13 . 3/30/2004
Thank God ur back! Well... as in alive... still here. I thought COO was gone for good... I love it and it be so wrong for it to stop. Its really ur choice i guess... but please no! I wonder too what ur marius and atre do too. So cool! I wish LOD2 could be based on ur fic. Muah, we're glad ur alive. ;)
We all share the same hell in this world.
fic: perfect (just more!)
| Torii chapter 13 . 3/20/2004
; tis okay rap's. You"LL UPDATE THE BEST ONE WHEN THE TIME COMES! _ But, i can;t wiat still lol. I wanna see what happens, is Doel n' LLoyd gonna try n' kill Rose n' Lavi, or the other way around lol. _ Jus' wonderin' CAN'T WAIT! _
| OneCrazyMuthaTrucka chapter 13 . 3/19/2004
Zeima-Winter? You're Russian? So am I! And don't you worry your head about a thing, Raps's. We've got four good authors on these forums regularly updating.
So, take all the time ya want ]. And have fun with life. That's the point of it.
| DarkMoon chapter 12 . 12/20/2003
E! Atre' is *so* cool, Rap's. If I had a character that was that cool, and well-developed - I'd be a happy, happy woman. That is all. _
Actually, I just wanted to say something about this part-
"The Winglys managed to cheat Soa out of her plans once- by finding the God of Destruction and separating the Soul from the Flesh, thus creating the Moonchild. If the moonchild harbored the Soul, and that Soul attempted to return to the flesh, the God would be reborn and cause the end of the world.
-that never made sense to me in the game. I never really grasped what they were trying to say, but you managed to explain it perfectly. *bows* I tip my hat to you. I just spent 2 hours reading this thing from the beginning, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Mayzon chapter 12 . 11/25/2003
OK I just got to the last part of chapter 12 and there is God knows no other fic I have read that is this suspenseful I mean how you can have so many plots running at once and keep me from not getting to confused is my guess. And I got to hand it to you your OC characters are just fantastic in so many ways.
Rap's if there was ever any kind of a sequel to LOD I would say you made it. Any how I hope you keep with this sometime soon but take your time
cause I'll be waiting so drop me an email if you do. So See ya tell then!
| Songwind chapter 13 . 11/14/2003
Let me get something off my chest before I say anything specific about your story. *takes a deep breath* ... WOW.
This story is amazing. I enjoy reading about the characters, for starters- you have written them in a way that I would consider reasonable. No, not reasonable; almsot expected. Meru's gotten a bit more mature, but not too much. Miranda... I don't know. I would consider her to be a tad more standoffish than you have her portrayed here, but that could just be my perception of her.
Next, your descriptions. I ENVY you for your awesome ability to add details to your story, as I am a mere dialogue gal (or I like to think so) _. Your descriptions are concise in such a way that I don't feel like you leave anything out, but it doesn't take forever for you to write about one thing.
Also, the length of the chapters are good. I think that it's actually better to wait longer and get a long, great chapter than a bunch of shorter ones.
You may have a couple mispelled words, but for that I would only suggest checking through with a spellcheck on your computer and scuh.
As for your not having a beta... maybe you could ask someone online to beta your story for you? Your payment for them would be getting to read more of the story before anyone else, not to mention getting a chance to help influence said story. *Smiles*
I sincerely hope you continue this soon.
| LM chapter 13 . 11/11/2003
You know what Rap's? I have been meaning to read this for FOREVER. I just now got through with it. Read the whole flippin' thing in one sitting.
I couldn't stop!
You are portraying the characters very well. You describe each scene with detail so that the reader understands, but is not overloaded with words. You aren't rushing. It's really looking very good. Excellent story! There was only one time (maybe somewhere in the earlier chapters...5 maybe) where you used the same word to describe something in maybe...three consecutive sentences. It wasn't really bad if that was the word you want (not that I remember what it was), it just kind of stuck out, so I thought I'd mention it. Wish I could tell you were it was. When I get bored I'll find it and tell you.
| xaphanea chapter 13 . 10/22/2003
Rap's, you rock my world. You have been so dedicated to everything that you've done, and you've made a difference to a lot of people. This story has been coming along wonderfully, and I await the day when you upload another chapter. You're an amazing writer, and we all understand the pressures of life around that. So you take all of the time that you need, and when you're ready to come back, we'll definitely be ready to welcome you. You take care, Rap's, and good luck with everything.
| Rhoswen too lazy to log in chapter 12 . 10/19/2003
o.o Atre' is funny...*cheers* _! I love it!
Keep up the good work, but remember, your offline life comes first. We'll be here when you get back. _
| OneCrazyMuthaTrucka chapter 13 . 10/17/2003
Look, it's been a month since you last updated and your fic kinda wasn't on the front page. I know you have deadlines to meet but if you can't meet them, then there's no need to tell us that. We can understand, and I can say that nobody should be so rude as to demand an update when you can't provide. I am sure people can understand, so this note might have been unnecessary, but on the good note it shows that you care about your readers :). Thanks for caring :)