Apart from some grammar errors (I'm sorry! I'm slightly picky about this) I liked it a lot! Did you have this based around George having schizophrenia or something? Either way, sooooo good!

This was interesting, I will say. It wasn't what I had expected it to be, and I like how you show George as going a little insane with his son bringing back memories.

Great story! I like how you made George almost crazy with hysterical anxiety at seeing 'Lennie' again.