Reviews for Numb
Faith O chapter 2 . 2/7/2017
I really like it! Realistic but hopeful.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/19/2014
please write more! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Love it plz continue
AmetrineAngel chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I like this version MUCH BETTER than the way this chapter went in the book. I would continue reading if you kept going with this. Great job! :)
the-not-so-bad-wolf chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Full story puhlease!
Kexxles chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Thankyou thankyou thankyou. I just finished Allegiant and desperately needed a pick me up! Would love for you to continue this!
Mentathial chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
update it is awesome
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
It is way better than the other ending! Please write more!
SkyTheDemigod chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
Continue the story!
So Much For Trying chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Amazing! " I feel a drop of a warm liquid fall onto my face. Tears. Tobias, it's Tobias." That is probably one of my favorite parts of this chapter you can just see it.
sassycasbutt chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Wow, you are a really good writer! I like it!
Oliviathehalfblood chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
WHOOOOO THIS IS EPIC SO FAR! I like it. Good job. I would enjoy it if you updated it. Peace out- M. (P.S YAAAYYYY TOBIAS)
MVL2000 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
This is so good! Lol great minds think alike, I'm writing a fanfiction like this, too!