Reviews for Fallen Angels and Errors
FDsecretart chapter 9 . 2/18
THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST THE DEVIL IS A PARTTIMER FANFICS IVE READ!
FDsecretart chapter 8 . 2/18
XD lol, suzuno
FDsecretart chapter 7 . 2/18
Aaaaw
FDsecretart chapter 6 . 2/18
Oh noooooo lucifeeeeeeer
FDsecretart chapter 5 . 2/18
I cant stop readin this
FDsecretart chapter 1 . 2/18
Awesome...
chris19 chapter 8 . 2/1
I rather enjoyed the story, even though it was hard to ignore the very obvious spelling and grammar errors. I suggest you reread this and/or have someone else peer-review it for you. It was a cliche plot but you had some twists in it, so it was alright. I enjoyed your characterization for the cannon characters and your OC's. Keep up the good work.
shinygoldflower chapter 9 . 1/3
Even if your idea is commonly used, you do well in the story. Your plot is interesting, funny, and natural. I enjoy it. Btw, I wonder if Lu will start dating Saya or remain friends.
shinygoldflower chapter 8 . 1/3
The fighting is not as lively as I expected but you do OK.
shinygoldflower chapter 7 . 1/3
It's really typical to pair an assassin and her victim, like a scene in a suspense movie.
shinygoldflower chapter 6 . 1/3
Poor Lucifer.
shinygoldflower chapter 5 . 1/3
I am speechless about this chapter.
shinygoldflower chapter 4 . 1/3
I wonder if Saya were creature of hell.
shinygoldflower chapter 3 . 1/3
You'd better check the spelling in this chapter.
shinygoldflower chapter 2 . 1/3
LOL. The scene when Emi fell into trap is really funny. Nice work!
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