|Reviews for Fallen Angels and Errors|
| Armelia Arlert chapter 9 . 2/27
| Armelia Arlert chapter 8 . 2/27
| Armelia Arlert chapter 6 . 2/27
URUSHIHARA OMG IS HE GONNA BE OK WHAT ABOUT SUZUNO WILL SHE BE ALRIGHT INEEDS ANSWERS...wait...why don't I just finish reading the story...omg I feel so stupid
| Armelia Arlert chapter 1 . 2/27
My guesses so far
Chiho (i highly doubt it though seeing ad hike she is in live with Maou)
Emi (i highly doubt that too cuz she hates Lucifer's guts)
Suzuno(it could be her since she knows where he lives and all that she could be playing dumb)
Stalker ( well Urushihara out looks like you've glut a stalker a creepy weirdo who watches you day in and day out)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/27
My guesses so far
Chibi (i highly doubt it seeing as how she is in live with Maou
| XThatAnonymousWriterX chapter 9 . 2/18/2015
THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST THE DEVIL IS A PARTTIMER FANFICS IVE READ!
| XThatAnonymousWriterX chapter 8 . 2/18/2015
XD lol, suzuno
| XThatAnonymousWriterX chapter 7 . 2/18/2015
| XThatAnonymousWriterX chapter 6 . 2/18/2015
Oh noooooo lucifeeeeeeer
| XThatAnonymousWriterX chapter 5 . 2/18/2015
I cant stop readin this
| XThatAnonymousWriterX chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
| chris19 chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
I rather enjoyed the story, even though it was hard to ignore the very obvious spelling and grammar errors. I suggest you reread this and/or have someone else peer-review it for you. It was a cliche plot but you had some twists in it, so it was alright. I enjoyed your characterization for the cannon characters and your OC's. Keep up the good work.
| shinygoldflower chapter 9 . 1/3/2015
Even if your idea is commonly used, you do well in the story. Your plot is interesting, funny, and natural. I enjoy it. Btw, I wonder if Lu will start dating Saya or remain friends.
| shinygoldflower chapter 8 . 1/3/2015
The fighting is not as lively as I expected but you do OK.
| shinygoldflower chapter 7 . 1/3/2015
It's really typical to pair an assassin and her victim, like a scene in a suspense movie.