Reviews for Fahrenheit
KageNoSakura chapter 5 . 4/6/2015
Please update! O: this story is awesome!
SuperPotterWhoLocked Okay chapter 5 . 11/7/2014
From what I can see on the details up top screen, you haven't updated since March 23rd? Is everything alright? If not, happy to listen!
I really enjoyed what you've written of this story so far, and I think the idea is essentially a good one, but have you thought about future plot developments, for when she does learn about Seth and the wolf pack of La Push?
What did Brady mean by ritual, as well? I can't think of a moment when it was mentioned! And who found her when she crawled out the rose bush?! These questions must be answered, my friend, and I hope you find the time to do so.
Meanwhile, i shall follow this story, and eagerly await more! :) xxx
Ninnani chapter 5 . 7/2/2014
Literally one of the best written imprint fics I've read in a long time and you haven't updated in 3 months.
Please tell me you're still working on this? I want to read more so badly.
Your writing style is so great and smooth, and you capture the characters so well. You do a great jump of writing the mystery of allie's nightmares and the static scene was my favorite.
Keep up the good work, even if it's not on this story. You're a very talented writer.
Fionamoi chapter 5 . 5/26/2014
please update!
jules chapter 5 . 5/1/2014
I love this story line! Please keep updating!
Sideswipe124 chapter 5 . 4/11/2014
Pleeeaasseee hurry up and update!
Gracie.gogs chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
Nooooooooo! :O You can't leave it like that?! I think I'm gonna go crazy pleeeeeeeeeeeease update ASAP!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
OHMIGOD. I want you to update as soon as possible! This is a really well written, interesting story and I am just about in love with all of your characters. And Brady? I just... I can't even. He's wonderful. I can't wait to read more :)
kiwihipp chapter 5 . 3/23/2014
A refreshingly different story! I am looking forward to reading the rest of it!
Sideswip124 chapter 4 . 3/13/2014
(Fanfiction is being stupid and won't let me log in;-;)
This is really well writen, and in my opinion, better than the original book.
You must hurry up and update!

"Oh, God, are we going to be the type of relatives that hug?" He groaned loudly.

"We could brawl if you'd prefer?"

Brady laughed at this. "It's sweet that you think you could ever possibly take me in a fight,"

"What makes you think I couldn't?" I said, glowering at him now.

"Well, you're like five foot nothing and probably weigh as much as a sixth grader," he stated, matter-of-fact and annoying as ever. "I'm built like a tank and, more importantly, a man. A very manly man, in fact."

I snorted at this, snorted. I never snort.
Bravo, bravo.

synpitou chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
You've got a pretty good story going here! :) Though I do feel the need to tell you y'all isn't used when referring to just one person, we use it when referring to two or more people since it's basically a contraction for 'you all'.

Keep up the good work!
doctorhardy chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
really liking this so far, when she hears the truth i wonder what her reaction will be
Guest chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
Oooooh what if! I love Seth and Allie and Brady too! You're portrayal of each character is great, you really give them depth and it's easy to imagine them as real people doing real things. Cannot wait to read more and I think that when they kiss it should be in the rain seeing as they missed their chance this time around.
msamazingface chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
Another great chapter!

I'd like to see the supernatural side of this story brought out a little more as I can tell in the last chapter you were beginning to hint towards it. I think Seth and Allie are going to have a lot more arguments, too, and I like the idea of it because it shows that even in imprinting everything isn't smooth sailing...
msamazingface chapter 3 . 3/11/2014
I absolutely love the relationship between Allie and Brady, it feels so real and they both have such great characters! Obviously Seth still needs to be brought out of his shell a little but I love the effect that he already has on his imprint, so I can't wait to read more about them!
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